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Cerebrate Chronicals VI
Author: Protogod
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Sarius gazed into his brother's eyes, as Tel'ka lifted him by his throat. However, before anyone could be killed, the entire carrrier shook from a yamato blast to the spacecraft's side. Sarius was dropped to the cold metal floor. The carrier soon went out of control, and panick overcame even the strongest of crew members. Taking advantage of the panick, Sarius leapt onto a ledge over the main entrance to the control room. Suddenly, a psionic blast sent Sarius crashing through the wall above the door. Sarius looked up only to see Tel'ka sending his commrades to their deaths. Psionic lightning filled the room, as Captain Smithfield and Lieutenant Jack cried out in pain. Soon the lightning faded, and the two wearriors lie there...motionless.
"RUN!" cried out a familiar voice. Scott's goliath rose, and charged towards Tel'ra with it's guns blazing. Sadly, with a wave of the wrist, Tel'ra sent the goliath crashing down, into a control panel. Slowly, Tel'ra walked toward the broken goliath. Sarius watched powerlessly, as his brother proceeded to bombard the goliath with dozens of psionic blasts. Sarius crawled down the hall, as Scott and his goliath were obliterated. Sarius finally reached an escape shiuttle, and escaped. Looking back, he saw a damaged carrier, being pursued by a battlecruiser. Finally, the battlecruiser had finished charging another yamato blast, and let it loose upon the carrier. An awe inspiring explosion followed. The orange blast came crashing through the engine of the carrier. It flew out of control into the atmosphere of a small jungle planet. Sarius breathed a sigh of relief, before realising his little escape shuttle couldnt escape the gravitational pull of the very same planet.

The shuttle came through the atmosphere, smashing through trees and boulders. Sarius weakly crawled out of the wreckage. He took refuge in a small cave. After days of filthy water and malnutrition, Sarius decided it was better to takew his chances to look for civilization than remaining in the cave for the rest of his life. After what seemed like hours of walking, he began to have an uneasy feeling. He looked around, panick stricken. He hurried deeper and deeper into the dense jungle. Soon it came to the point where he wasnt evel looking anymore, he was just running. But no matter where he went, he could still feel the piercing eyes of someone...or something. Finally, he dropped into an enormous pit. Sarius frantically looked everywhere. He was drencdhed in cold sweat, and shivers ran up his spine. The sounds of wild beasts echoed through the pit. Walking carefully down the only tunnel out of the pit, Sarius stumbled upwards. The further he walked, however, the more uneasy he felt. AT first he heard a faint buzzing, but little by little, it grew stronger, and more sounds were added in. Eventually he found an enormous drop. The tunnel simply stopped moving forward. He looked over the edge, and what he saw filled him with terror. Hundreds of zerg were hurrying, all in different directions. Suddenly, Sarius turned, firing a psionic blast into a zergling that had been sneaking up on him. Just then, the dirt in the side of the tunnel burst open, letting loose half a dozen hydralisls. Sarius fired two more blasts into the hydralisks, pushing himself off the edge. Sarius caught himself on a ledge, just a few dozen feet over the heads of the zerg below.

Soon the hydralisks above peeked their heads over the edge, and sighted Sarius below. Kicking off from the ledge, Sarius sent himself across the enormous room.He landed near a tunnel at the bottom of the room. He didn't even bothr fighting, but rather ran straight through the tunnel. Now he had zerg monsters of every type imagineable following him. He eventually came to another large, open room, and leapt straight up. He fired a psionic blast down onto the top of the entrance. The tunnel he had entered from caved in, allowing few zerg entrance. Sarius ran into the middle of the few zerg in the same room. He suddenly changed direction, and fired blasts into a couple zerglings. Turning around, he found himself face to face with a hydralisk. He jumped, just as the hydralisk fired it's spines. Sarius came down fast, kicking the hydralisk in the face. The hydralisk went flying, and crashed into the wall. In moments, the remaining zerg were dispatched. Sarius examined his situation. There were no other exits...he was trapped.


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1, DeepHate
Date: Jun 13, 2005
Time: 12:14 AM
 
Things happened to fast nothing was built up and it got alittle boring towards the end. overall average.

2, Protogod (Senior Moderator)
Date: Jun 13, 2005
Time: 01:55 AM
 
heh, i know. im just trying to write something, cause i havent made anything im like 3 or 4 months

3, Snot
Date: Jun 13, 2005
Time: 11:08 AM
 
Well, I have to agree with DeepHate with this one. You could have done a bit better, kind of... Dry if you will.

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