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Last Battle-In Haiku
Author: StarCraftMasta
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We wake with a start,
Knowing it’s those damn creatures,
That they call the Zerg.

Shouting and screaming,
And more howls of despair,
Is all that we hear.

We run out the tent,
All that meets our faces,
Is death in our eyes.

Yet it is our duty,
Our duty to serve, protect,
All that we hold dear.

Women and children,
Sons, daughters, friends, family,
Is all that we have.

Yet the time will come,
When I fall forevermore,
Into my final rest.

I will lie in peace,
Knowing I fought till the end,
While others weep.

Can you hear that noise?
It’s those damn creatures again,
That they call the Zerg.


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1, StarCraftMasta
Date: Jan 07, 2008
Time: 10:31 AM
 
Who left a vote with no comment?

2, StarCraftMasta
Date: Jan 14, 2008
Time: 08:29 AM
 
This sounds cheesy when I read it to myself for the 400th time.

3, Ling666
Date: Jan 15, 2008
Time: 10:35 AM
 
Is it actually a haiku?

4, Seven
Date: Jan 21, 2008
Time: 05:59 PM
 
Everything sounds cheesy when you read it 400 times. Nice one. Exp.

5, jello12
Date: Feb 10, 2008
Time: 03:19 AM
 
Nice Haiku

6, lluke7
Date: Mar 19, 2008
Time: 01:47 AM
 
LOVELY!!!

7, StarCraftMasta
Date: Mar 28, 2008
Time: 11:11 PM
 
Thx guyz.. I wish this had been on the new section, then I would've gotten more views btw...=].

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