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A Stand on Auir pt.2
Author: Protogod
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"What do you mean a 'biggrer problem'?", said the protoss commander.
"look at the photos"
"Those look like ordinary hunter-killer hydralisks."
"look at this photo", said the warrior, as he selected a new photo on the golden computer. "See that thing leading them?"
"What is that!?"
"It's not the same as any zerg monster we have seen before."
"Cross-reference the databases."
"I am", said the warrior. "Oh, no!", shouted the zealot, "look!"
"It says here its...dead."
"I know."
The beast on the screen was a monstrous being. Drool running down its chin as it struck down zealot after zealot. Blood sprayed up upon the creature, running down its neck, dripping onto the floor. The hunter-killers fired their spines across the battlefields, impaling the zealots, and/or destroying their limbs. The leader dismembered each brave zealot as they charged forth, their golden armor shining in the light. Their psi-blades glimmered, as well as their plasma-shields. The monster's jowels moistened, as it saw the zealots garging through the volleys of spines. Dozens of zealots were cut down in their ranks as the bony spines cut through the metal. As the dust of falling warriors rose, the zealots' armor faded and dimmed. The brave warriors were smothered in dust and dirt. Wave after wave of spines flew blindly into the cloud of smoke as the warriors advanced. The leader of the zerg prepared as the charge neared it's end.
The zealots reached the zerg forces and the battle began. The hunter-killer hydralisks fell back behind their leader, as it took down countless warriors effortlessly. The leader's claws peirced the plasma-shields, and the zealots all fell at the hands of the powerful monster. The monster's tail lashed out, killing the advancing protoss. The zealots surrounded the zerg leader, but the beast took each one down within moments. Corpses littered the field of Auir. The zerg fought through the city, defeating countless warriors along the way. The zerg eventually held up in the protoss capital. The hydralisks fired from the windows, as their leader crushed the remaining forces who made it into the building. The monster dragged in countless bodies, piling them in the control room.
Suddenly, waves of zerg dropped from the sky, bringing with them death and destruction. Fires raged through the city. Overlords followed the fleet, dropping off more hydralisks, as well as drones. In hours, the corpses were re-animated, not as the powerful hybrids just more like infested terran, and flooding the city. Explosions tore the city apart. Days went by, and the zerg invasion quickly spread. They quickly took control of the protoss temples, holding the only points of leverage that the protoss had over them. A crafty protoss commander known as ru'aal pushed through the gates at the protoss headquarters at the center of the remaining city.
"I've recieved word that we are battling the same creature that we did at the terran research ship.", said ru'aal.
"Yes, it appears that the zerg attack was a diversion to get the creature and some defences into our city."
"That thing took my son, give me the men you can spare."
"Your son, what's your name."
"I am ru'aal, father of xa'ruul."
"He disappeared long before, what makes you think that he survived his endeavor long enough to be killed by that thing?"
"I recieved word from terran command, it appears that a recording revealed the ordeal."
"Why should we give our already sparce troops to you?"
"I have a plan..."


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1, Anonymous
Date: Dec 23, 2004
Time: 01:55 PM
 
Not to cover any misfortunate mistakes I made, but I'm starting to think that all the enemies I made on this site are trying to make my stories look bad, because today I checked and most of my ratings dropped more than usually expected.

2, GriffonHeart
Date: Mar 17, 2005
Time: 11:36 PM
 
Sorry, Proto, I have to comment later, but I did like the story. Still, I need to read part I!

-Griff

3, Terranlord18
Date: Oct 29, 2005
Time: 09:09 PM
 
Good story. It was well written with few mistakes.

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