AzVortez
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The following are documents submitted by this user:
| # | Document | Channel |
| 1 | Korhal And Braxis | Fan Art |
| 2 | Korhal Re-Done | Fan Art |
| 3 | Korhal Epidemic - Chapter 1 | Fiction |
| 4 | Korhal Epidemic - Lost Hope - [2] | Fiction |
| 5 | Korhal Epidemic - Prologue | Fiction |
| 6 | Marine Combat Guide | Fiction |
| 7 | Operation Kidnap | Fiction |
| 8 | StarCraft - The Peaceful Version | Fiction |
| 9 | The Zerg Gang | Fiction |
The following are comments posted by this user:
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#1. Posted on June 26, 2008 07:58 PM. all i can say is.. are you SURE that your just a starcraft.org member, and not a blizzard employee leaking stuff for us very faithful fans? 
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#2. Posted on May 19, 2008 09:35 PM. exp more please and i like the quote from the starcraft:ghost trailer ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#3. Posted on May 08, 2008 06:46 PM. thats the shipping date. that just means SC2 MUST come out before dec 3 '08. from all i've heard, SC could come out as soon as early September, but it will most likely come out late Nov. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#4. Posted on May 06, 2008 07:02 PM. thanks deadfast. i totally forgot about fenix the protoss, and i'll cut down on the captilized letters and the modern day things. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#5. Posted on April 28, 2008 05:11 PM. why.. would he feel like throwing a party? his girlfriend is almsot dead ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#6. Posted on April 28, 2008 05:03 PM. a scantid cant kill anyone except an unarmored person, let alone a fully armored marine dressed in cmc-300 armor that weighs 1 ton, and if ghosts could just get killed by a simple critter, whats the point of even bothering training them? you have to train them from childhood, its a waste of time and money ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#7. Posted on April 01, 2008 07:03 PM. psh, the video was way too sarcastic ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#8. Posted on March 20, 2008 12:59 PM. man, i wish i was in paris.. i so want to play SCII ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#9. Posted on March 15, 2008 04:53 PM. um, ok? also, i think it'd be nice if you did things in paragraph ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#10. Posted on February 09, 2008 03:39 PM. very good correction: exceptional ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#11. Posted on February 09, 2008 03:18 PM. i dont think the terrans know what the xel'naga is.. and they're suppose to be extinct (until further notice from blizzard) also, a semi-psychic who can detect enemy movements (even in the smallest degree) would've been sent to the ghost academy ASAP also, dark templar are protoss. The DT's are invisible because they have the ability to bend light with their psychic powers. Ghost's without their inhibitors should also be able to do that (some) Xel'Naga don't have "Dark Templars" ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#12. Posted on February 09, 2008 12:52 AM. i think you need to brush up on your starcraft history before writing. a couple pointers: 1. Raszagal is dead, killed by Zeratul because Kerrigan infested her. (this was before activation of the temple) 2. Shakuras is now a desert (after activation of the temple), and there are no "majestic" buildings, the Protoss lost all their buildings after the activation of the temple I like your writing style though, very nice. Although I think the "Zerg suddenly appearing" doe ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#13. Posted on December 09, 2007 09:42 AM. awesome story -exp- but i wouldnt it have made more sense to just nuke the place? it wouldve cost less and be more efficient ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#14. Posted on December 08, 2007 01:41 PM. the ghost who works for raynor's personality is wrong (i think). they're talking like theyre equals, but everything else, EXP ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#15. Posted on December 08, 2007 11:11 AM. no idea why this is rated good, this is EXP*2 although i was reading how one of the zealots had the choice to become a templar, but instead chose to be a zealot.. you actually have to be a zealot before you can become a templar ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#16. Posted on December 06, 2007 06:40 PM. legs look kinda girlish.. exp otherwise ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#17. Posted on December 06, 2007 05:40 PM. i dont care just as long as they make all the races balanced. zerg super units not cool, i already dislike the mothership ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#18. Posted on November 17, 2007 06:55 PM. too predictable, and a bit exagerrated. reminds me of me when i first started here, lol. anyways, i think you should stop here, and re-think your storyline, you want your stories to have a twist, and im speaking from experience, lol ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#19. Posted on October 01, 2007 04:26 PM. let blizzard do what they need, i trust they'll balance this game out properly this time (unlike wc3  ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#20. Posted on September 17, 2007 08:56 PM. FIRST COMMENT! had to do it as for an actual comment.. YES! FINALLY! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#21. Posted on September 02, 2007 06:52 PM. why in the world would someone optical flare a lurker? just stim up, make sure your rines rnt in a line, and atk simple, easy, prob 1 rine dies, and 50 minerals traded for 75+50=125 minerals and 25+100=125 gas is a very good trade. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#22. Posted on September 02, 2007 06:47 PM. LOL MICRO ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#23. Posted on September 02, 2007 06:38 PM. uh, how do you *push off* a seige tank with a surfacing depot when its deployed? its already stuck! as for the drone, where have we seen that? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#24. Posted on September 01, 2007 06:31 AM. lyye, you should NEVER ever do that. when they do stack, instead of attacking, they struggle to get off of each other. so you just wasted like 10 seconds getting hit. mistake i made before
just bunch them into a big group (without stacking!) and then surrond them, and attack ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#25. Posted on August 31, 2007 09:50 PM. theres a firebat? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#26. Posted on August 31, 2007 04:55 PM. so the supply depot's ability is just to be used as a wall i was hopin we could use it as a bomb shelter ^^ o well anyways, i think it should be less vulerable to normal attack when its submerged, and more vulnerable to explosive attacks. just getting that feeling oh well ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#27. Posted on June 28, 2007 10:30 AM. i just wanna pull those rocks outta its skin. RAAAWR -exp- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#28. Posted on June 28, 2007 10:28 AM. WARNING: Do not trespass on Disney property Black dino fused into a hoverboard that has blue brains might come and slice you up. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#29. Posted on June 28, 2007 10:17 AM. she looks scary! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#30. Posted on June 28, 2007 10:16 AM. reminds me of TMNT ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#31. Posted on June 28, 2007 10:15 AM. LOL! urinal training whoever said why the arms arent correctly porportioned, they are. read up on the Terran Infantry armor. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#32. Posted on June 28, 2007 10:11 AM. OMG RUN! ITS GODZILLA IN ARMOR! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#33. Posted on June 28, 2007 10:03 AM. another excellent story by x9 =D -exceptional- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#34. Posted on June 28, 2007 10:01 AM. i cant even tell if these are the Protoss or its some other world and race you've made up. i for one know that archons attack with pure psionic energy, not with blades. nvm, its the toss -.- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#35. Posted on June 28, 2007 09:58 AM. ok, again, impossible odds. i can see you put alot more thought into this one than the last, but seriously, a bit more realistic please. a dropship carrying turrents? 2 missles just owning wraiths like that? btw, terran units dont have shields, period. and dropships dont cloak. did i mention a missle turrent is slightly bigger than a dropship? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#36. Posted on June 22, 2007 12:29 AM. some one else made a better corshair on this site. 4got who ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#37. Posted on June 22, 2007 12:26 AM. NOO!!! I didn't get a ticket ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#38. Posted on June 22, 2007 12:25 AM. i liked it, although i think you could've cut down on the code. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#39. Posted on June 22, 2007 12:24 AM. this was pointless. put some more work into your drawings before you submit please. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#40. Posted on June 22, 2007 12:23 AM. a bit too blocky, and i dont think the shine is in the right places. just a weird feeling. also, the bg doesnt blend at all with the immortal. Try making it a bit more round, and blur the shine. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#41. Posted on June 22, 2007 12:21 AM. i think posting this was pointless. lots of people have already seen this. if you wanted to show every1, you coulda just went to www.warboards.org and posted a link instead. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#42. Posted on June 22, 2007 12:20 AM. I agree with MoH with everything except the blades. DT's all have green blades. Also, they have green eyes too, but thats a different story. I also liked how you defined the muscles, but wheres the other blade? Also, DT's don't have the arm bracelet thing to control their psi power into blades. They're alot more effiecient with their control, and can warp it into blades, which are about twice the size of a normal zealot psi blade. -good- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#43. Posted on June 21, 2007 08:51 PM. ok, im not the very critic type for art, because i suck at it. But some things you should know: 1. Protoss have legs more like horses, not frogs. Watch the cinematics (the one of shakuras and the xel naga temple) 2. DT's don't have psi blades like that. Their blades are actually poisonus green (darker shading?), and their bigger, longer, and shaped like a scimatar, except more curved. For some reason the Zeratul pic on SC2 doesn't match up to all what has been said before SC2, but i'd rath ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#44. Posted on June 21, 2007 08:48 PM. 10 minutes, nice. exp because i love you (aww) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#45. Posted on June 21, 2007 08:45 PM. i half expected him holding one of those red extinguishing cans. -no vote- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#46. Posted on June 21, 2007 08:44 PM. i think it was a very good drawing, but it isnt very clear. a bit clogged, and reminds me of sand paper. -very good- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#47. Posted on June 19, 2007 06:42 PM. you do know that psi blades only work for the protoss, right? Protoss and Terran have different psi energies. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#48. Posted on June 19, 2007 06:36 PM. lol xD i forgot about that. wow.. I haven't read this in like two weeks or something. And im re-reading it.. I almost feel like bashing my head in. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#49. Posted on June 19, 2007 06:33 PM. noooo, don't stop writing! never give up! even though the feedback is harsh and stuff... Still, you can always imrpove (like me!) a little messy. I've seen how fast you submit your stuff,and it's like you do a new story almost every day, lol. When you finish, just read your stuff. Rate it yourself, before you submit. If you don't like it, go back and change it. That's what I do  ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#50. Posted on June 19, 2007 06:26 PM. Ok, seems like you've taken a step back. Again, don't put your comments into the story. The paragraphs need to be longer, and the things more detailed. Also, when theres a conversation, don't leave half of it out. It just doesn't make sense. Also, if a hole gets blown in a ship that size (because it manuevers about the same speed as the interceptors), everyone would either be sucked out of it, or it would crash. Period. Realism? 
Anyways, its alot better than your first work.
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#51. Posted on June 17, 2007 05:23 PM. honestly, the only problem i have with this is the cliffs and the geysers. Sure, we might have to cutback on gas and micro well with what minerals we have, but it's not something everyone likes to cope with. I'm not saying the map is bad or good because of the lack of gas, i'm just pointing this out. As for the cliff, this is where it becomes unbalanced. If there was no ramp to acess the cliffs, I would say thats more fair, because you force the Terrans to get dropships in order to use the cl ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#52. Posted on June 17, 2007 04:40 PM. Still, the storyline is important. Althought it would be funny if Mengsk was a garbage man xD Whoa. I can hear a garbage truck right now. Not kidding. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#53. Posted on June 17, 2007 04:36 PM. If they give the barracks an add-on.. christ man... From the looks of everything, Blizzard is shaping SC2 into a more of a single-player game. They're giving normal fighting units all these spells, when we already have quickly calculate what units we need to counter the opponent. With the new spells the normal fighting units are getting (etc, mutating into banelings, twilight archons disruption web), it's going to be serious mirco rather than macro. And honestly, I will miss macro. Wonder ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#54. Posted on June 17, 2007 02:26 PM. FIRST!! -Exp- I don't really like to read long stuff though oh well, still its excellent
EDIT: Btw, I don't find the Protoss the type to give pep talks to get their blood pumping. They're usually calm, and use their time to think clearly. ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#55. Posted on June 14, 2007 10:01 PM. FIRST COMMENT! -exp- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#56. Posted on June 14, 2007 09:23 PM. OMG, i got the perfect idea for my next comedy. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#57. Posted on June 14, 2007 08:25 PM. Not true Clone! play that campaign again where the Toss + Terran clear the way for Tassadar to blow up in the Overminds face. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#58. Posted on June 14, 2007 08:20 PM. I think you should re-read your stuff before you submit it -good- everything i wanted to say has pretty much been said. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#59. Posted on June 14, 2007 08:18 PM. too short and unrealistic. but atleast the 1 zergling part was funny. also, don't give specific numbers for units like that. just works better =) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#60. Posted on June 14, 2007 08:15 PM. like wereperson said, it sounds coo, but its messed up. try being more descriptive, and make your paragrpahs longer. Also, make the emotions of people more realistic, as to situations and plot. and where's your other parts of the series? it says you only have two submissions. -ba- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#61. Posted on June 14, 2007 08:13 PM. 1. Edit before you submit 2. Make up a realistic race unless you've stated its a comedy 3. More noticable paragraphs 4. More description Ok, so you have alot of mistakes. But you can always improve =) but for now.. its PB ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#62. Posted on June 14, 2007 08:08 PM. im a Terran player.. soo.. -exp- EDIT: Good The only Protoss I know who talk like this is the Conclave. And if the Tassadar already killed the Overmind, I doubt the Conclave is still alive. But maybe there's still a crazy un-noble Protoss out there. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#63. Posted on June 14, 2007 07:55 PM. I like the older model. -good- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#64. Posted on June 14, 2007 07:31 PM. wow, the cannons can move. cheap. for some reason i'm getting a bad feeling about SC2 becoming really unbalanced. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#65. Posted on June 11, 2007 04:27 PM. k, thx infested =D cant believe people like comedy more than an actual story =P oh well. Guess I better get onto that next comedy? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#66. Posted on June 11, 2007 04:21 PM. OMG WHO GAVE ME A PB?! EDIT: Why do some people have to be such haters ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#67. Posted on June 10, 2007 10:11 AM. and yes MrBobby, that was funny.. My little fanfic on this: The Terran's readied themselves, waiting for the opposing Zerg Brood to rush their main entry point. Even though they had a superior force, their infantry's dicsipline was horrible. The Marines and Firebats constantly injected themselves with Stim Paks, trying to get high. As each unit started to OD, the medics had to go heal them. Soon the medics were out of energy, panting for breath. And on cue, the Zerg rushed. Since all the ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#68. Posted on June 10, 2007 10:02 AM. Ganthridor, you had a pretty bad period? i thought u were a guy
lol.
Anyways, not descriptive, and you totally ruined the Protoss' culture. The Protoss are respective, and they don't say things like "lifes been like hell".
Zeratul was weird, always seeming like some weird prophet dude from wc3, didnt really appreciate it. Zeratul is usually a noble, but straigh the point dude.
Also, emotions don't change that fast. like *angry* "Oh god, so many Zerg", then right ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#69. Posted on June 10, 2007 09:50 AM. didnt you already post this story? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#70. Posted on June 10, 2007 09:49 AM. Some parts weren't so well written.. -avg- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#71. Posted on June 10, 2007 09:35 AM. its OK x9. I didnt expect this fiction to get anywhere xD come to think of it... maybe i should write a fiction that includes a 98th clone and the x9 project =O on a planet named Ganthridor 2 xD lol ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#72. Posted on June 10, 2007 09:10 AM. The blind guy hardly memorized the map. If you watched properly, he saved his locations on his map. So when he wanted to go to a specific location, he could press his loc button and the minimap would automatically jump to where he saved the location. I guess the locations he saved were his base and choke, boxers base and choke, plus all the expos. Still though, the units micro alone is stunning. =( imagine if he wasnt blind, lol. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#73. Posted on June 08, 2007 09:27 PM. LOL! The things a freakin monster that can blow a concrete or metal wall down, whichever it was (cauz the wall sure as hell wasnt made of paper), but it gets pwned by a little glass from its cell.. Wow, lol. Also, you need to be more descriptive. Paint an image for people. Sure you should leave room for imagination, but you want to keep imagination controlled. Also, your paragraphs need to be longer. I have to agree with ganthridor, there were suppose to be bunches of other hybrid faciliti ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#74. Posted on June 08, 2007 09:15 PM. oi rich kid! buy sgt a pwnin computer! lol, nothing short of exp. -EXP- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#75. Posted on June 08, 2007 08:56 PM. i tried that! but photoshop is just being an arse. if you look really hard at korhal, you can see the clouds. I took an hour and a half doing to clouds, and then when I finished, i realized that the cloud opacity was too low > grrr
as for the atmospheric glow, can you suggest a hex number for me to use? ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#76. Posted on June 08, 2007 07:36 PM. looks like it has duck feet. im also an animator and thats pretty good put into .gif
although from a animators view, thats probably just avg. soz ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#77. Posted on June 08, 2007 07:26 PM. i cant find the face
to me, it looks like a torri head and tusks with a centuar body. But i suppose thats just me..
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#78. Posted on June 08, 2007 07:20 PM. it was awesome. heres a few tips for submitting stuff to sc.org tho: -Seperate your paragraphs with the enter key. For some reason the tab key doesnt work on sc.org =( -Proof read your stuff before you submit. You might find small stuff you missed, or something else you wanted to change. Or maybe you already know this but your palm pilot affected it? But overall, this is excellent. The pace, action, plot, storyline, twist, and flow was excellent. If there was a option better than exp, i ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#79. Posted on June 08, 2007 06:33 PM. Pfft, I bet none of the gosu players out there could beat the blind guy with a blindfold on, lol. And isnt this video old or sumthin? I know i've seen it somewhere a long time ago... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#80. Posted on June 08, 2007 05:11 PM. westdc, i did use photoshop =P so i took alpha's advice and read some of those tuts. Thanks alpha, they helped alot
i submitted my end result (Name: Korhal Re-Done) ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#81. Posted on June 08, 2007 05:09 PM. *cries* no votes or comments? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#82. Posted on June 08, 2007 05:08 PM. And thats the beauty of new maps slickrick. each map means a different strategy needs to be devised. Maps aren't just defined by islands or land, the little things matter too. A cliff, a structure, the chokes, the doodads. -exp- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#83. Posted on June 08, 2007 11:01 AM. As always, good fan-fiction. I can see huge improvements from your old ones. Keep up the good work! =D ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#84. Posted on June 07, 2007 11:10 PM. ARGH, soz x9. What I MEANT to say was I read your fiction on Noob. GRRR, im stupid =( ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#85. Posted on June 05, 2007 05:04 PM. ooo man. I forgot to add the clouds! im also going to re-do the moon surface. maybe some more craters. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#86. Posted on June 05, 2007 05:02 PM. i know its stupid -.- lol. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#87. Posted on June 05, 2007 05:01 PM. Same as x9, but I think some of the pauses (or paragraphs, however you call it) weren't done properly. -good- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#88. Posted on June 04, 2007 08:03 PM. next time dont do the green black thing also, get flash 8 ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#89. Posted on June 04, 2007 07:58 PM. not very appealing ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#90. Posted on June 04, 2007 07:56 PM. Avg. Nice triggers. -Good ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#91. Posted on June 04, 2007 07:54 PM. Very imbalanced, and small building area. But hey, if it's TvT, then its who gets the tank first or gets the opponents workers.
-Avg ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#92. Posted on June 04, 2007 07:51 PM. -Building area a bit cramped, but not too noticable. -It's not fair that blue gets the high ground and red doesn't. Blue will have the cliff advantage and red won't, thereby giving units like goons, tanks, and other long ranged units easy targets. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#93. Posted on June 04, 2007 07:45 PM. Your obviously not going to drop without a fleet. You'll just get mowed down. And the only race with the defensive advantage is Terran, because marines only cost minerals and are ranged. I think its horrible that you have depleted vespene and yet gas is critical. Waiting and doing nothing is just a waste of time. -Below Average ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#94. Posted on June 04, 2007 07:21 PM. Don't even know how its possible to fold something like that. -Exp- (No vote) Like others, I think you should just post the link on warboards. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#95. Posted on June 04, 2007 07:18 PM. Excellent. -exp- However, a few things i think you should know: In reality: -Zerg don't think, they just do. They don't have enough brains to do so. -Zerg don't have names unless they've done very heroic feats. But, since I don't know anything about yours, i'll just leave it at that. But again, its your fiction. You write it as you choose to. =D -exp- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#96. Posted on June 04, 2007 06:53 PM. AznAcorn, if you've never played Mini SC, lemme clue u in =) It's basicly SC changed. I don't know about the BO's, but I do know that everything costs less, plus expanansions is pointless. It's sort of like a fastest game, but changed up more. Since I dont play Mini SC, I wont vote. And yes, I agree with you. Lurkers will own if you dont have any metal. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#97. Posted on June 04, 2007 06:38 PM. thx for comments and votes =D ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#98. Posted on June 04, 2007 06:33 PM. i read your noob article
thats what inspired this xD
I mean i read your fiction named noob XD ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#99. Posted on June 03, 2007 11:03 AM. Excellent, as always
-Exceptional- ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#100. Posted on June 03, 2007 01:05 AM. I guess this is more like a filler ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#101. Posted on June 02, 2007 10:15 PM. pfft, i dont care if its on lined paper. the sketch is awesome ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#102. Posted on June 02, 2007 10:12 PM. I think its a good strategy agaisnt an average metal person. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#103. Posted on June 02, 2007 10:06 PM. Probably not your best effort. The only effort I do see here is the photon cannon's glowing ball thing, w/e its called. I seriously thought it was a weird nexus at first =| ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#104. Posted on June 02, 2007 10:03 PM. I agree with masterofhobbiton. It took no effort. Anyone can overlap these with a overlay and opacity change. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#105. Posted on June 02, 2007 07:58 PM. OH NOES, THE ORC UNIT IS GONNA SMASH US ALL!!! If an Orc costs 200 gold, isnt an orc equivilant to 4 marines? 200 = 50*4 ? Wonder how many orcs are equivilant to a nuke... Funny story ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#106. Posted on June 02, 2007 07:37 PM. lol ganthridor... u actually voted exp.. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#107. Posted on June 02, 2007 07:34 PM. thx for reviews ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#108. Posted on June 02, 2007 08:49 AM. Very entertaining. Although there wasnt any action whatsoever, except that marine poppin two lings, i did like all the bio+tech. -exp- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#109. Posted on June 02, 2007 08:37 AM. your always funny
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#110. Posted on June 01, 2007 09:41 PM. Well, if you dont wanna follow guidelines, you can create your own units, like I did
I think there are lots of alternatives to writing Fan-Fic that can meet your needs and the readers needs =)
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#111. Posted on June 01, 2007 09:30 PM. well then be terran ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#112. Posted on June 01, 2007 05:25 PM. 3.1 I thought Duran's identity to the Dominion was sort of a secret and not publicized 3.2 I'll keep that in mind ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#113. Posted on May 31, 2007 10:53 PM. lol xD funny, isnt it.. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#114. Posted on May 31, 2007 10:52 PM. I can still see a couple errors, but I wont vote untill you've finished your edit. By the way, I noticed you still are using parenthatises or, these >> ( ) [Sorry, my english is horrible sometimes]. to explain things, like --- Sara sniped down the creatures with fatal bullets that pierced the brain(without ableness to recieve transmission Zerg are useless)and hearts. --- I think instead of explaining it plainly, you can somehow mix facts with story, and still make it intresting. Once ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#115. Posted on May 31, 2007 10:43 PM. Thanks for the comment X9. I feel the same way too. Not enough action, too much talk. I'll bring back the excitment next chapter. I also know its your policy to be positive, but I'd really like to know all your thoughts on my article, no matter how negative they are. That way I can fix them, and become better ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#116. Posted on May 31, 2007 04:43 PM. PLEAASE COMMENT ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#117. Posted on May 31, 2007 04:32 PM. EDIT: How do I delete this? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#118. Posted on May 31, 2007 07:49 AM. K. and no, i didnt vote for myself. oops, nvm. I think i did xD ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#119. Posted on May 30, 2007 08:25 PM. OK OK, I AM AWARE THIS WAS RETARDED maybe i should delete it? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#120. Posted on May 30, 2007 07:39 PM. wow, nukes.. I'm sorry, its just kinda sad. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#121. Posted on May 30, 2007 07:32 PM. I think its sort of a mix of a really bad story and really good poetry. I guess i'll give this an average. and no, this ISNT garbage. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#122. Posted on May 30, 2007 07:30 PM. EXACTLY what valvilant4 said and his legs too. Or maybe it's a female marine shaved bald? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#123. Posted on May 30, 2007 07:18 PM. Exceptional However, I don't get how he just gets in a fight, and next thing you know, he's infested. It doesn't make any sense at all. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#124. Posted on May 30, 2007 05:31 PM. A huge improvement from your last series. Exceptional. Also see a naruto refrence, or maybe im just stupid
anyways, good story. ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#125. Posted on May 30, 2007 05:27 PM. Everything x9 said. almost on the verge of good, but I gave it an exceptional. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#126. Posted on May 30, 2007 05:18 PM. ooook. No need to get so hostile. Oh, and the only way Kerrigan could learn how to hack is if she taught herself. Which I find impossible, because theres nothing to learn from, except encrypted terran stuff from their ships which she could never decrypt. But like x9 said, we're just trying to help you out ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#127. Posted on May 30, 2007 05:13 PM. Awesome. I really liked it
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#128. Posted on May 30, 2007 05:06 PM. I think you could explain some stuff more. It was an excellent plot though. But heres a few things I thought would help- -When did this happen? (Before the Confederacy fell?) -Where is this? (Planet?) -Is this an important or average place? But overall, I think its a good story. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#129. Posted on May 30, 2007 05:01 PM. Sorry, too random for me. And aren't Protoss very honorable people? (Atleast the majority, lol) Anyways, I gave this a -Good ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#130. Posted on May 30, 2007 04:58 PM. I liked your expo strategy, and I think its excellent for island expansions. However, for the 4 rax thing, I can't quite agree with that. For one, waiting for 300 minerals is just too long. A ling rush would kill you, or your opponenty might've gone lurkers. That or they can just overpower you with a bunch of lings. Sure, this strategy might be effective somewhere between the middle and end of the game, but it's not one I would use. 3 possible ways to counter this as a Zerg Ling Rush + ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#131. Posted on May 30, 2007 04:50 PM. Thanks man. I the starcraft biology and technology too (especialy the marine suit, how they have the anti-grav unit and air-ventliation unit. I actually have no idea how anti-grav is possible, since gravity is created by planet mass) However, I really felt like I needed to delete the techno+bio part because I wanted the demons to be more mysterious in the beggining. In the first chapter, I will explain how the Demons came about and also how they have their abilities. ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#132. Posted on May 28, 2007 08:28 PM. Hmm. Well, you had a nice plot and everything, but somethings were amiss. Like the rest of your series, everything is cluttered, and it doesnt make lots of sense. Yes, I know im somewhat a terrible writer, but these are just my feelings. And now onto something I DO know about ok, first of all I didnt read your whole series. Everything was too cluttered like I said above, with you starting a new paragraph with each new sentance, and jumping to this and that, not exactly explaining everyt ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#133. Posted on May 14, 2007 11:29 PM. wow, duran probably wasn't even human in the first place. if you played the secret brood war level, you would've known that duran was never really infested or terran, he just looked like both. He actually serves the hybrid, and probably his some kind of pure hybrid form himself. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#134. Posted on May 05, 2007 04:21 PM. Kerigan was specially breeded. Most zerg dont have an IQ over 10, they're just controlled by cerebrates or the overmind (and kerrigan). But normally, a zerg unit is mindless, and that makes them easy to control. Oh, overlords have better IQ's, because they need the brain power to manuever the zerg units if the cerabrate or overmind doesnt. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#135. Posted on May 05, 2007 04:19 PM. The armor uses things called 'servos'. Basicly inside the rine armor are sensitive motion pads. So if you move your right hand up, there will be more force on the upper pads, thus making the rine armor respond accordingly. So long as the servos work, the rine can move. But if the servos get hit, the rine gets stuck in the armor forever. Unless someone gets him out ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#136. Posted on May 05, 2007 03:43 PM. Is this just one of the games you played? This more like a replay in words, not an actual fan-fiction ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#137. Posted on April 23, 2007 09:19 PM. pretty good strat. Although if its a toss player, they prob hav a arbitor too. Then you might want a couple detectors with you. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#138. Posted on April 23, 2007 09:16 PM. this strat is horrible for low money. and in fastest, while you've been upgrading infantry, your opponent prob has mech units, or air already. Tech > Rush anytime, the only Tech weakness is that theyre defensless in the beggining. But on a fastest map they can tech and defense, so not a good strat at all. And this isnt even good agaisnt normal players, sorry. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#139. Posted on April 23, 2007 09:12 PM. this isnt even related to starcraft ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#140. Posted on April 19, 2007 06:28 PM. nice story ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#141. Posted on April 18, 2007 09:48 PM. the ending didnt make any sense. Once you become Zerg, dont you become mindless? ... Click here to view this comment. |
