AzureWrath
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The following are documents submitted by this user:
| # | Document | Channel |
| 1 | In Honor of Jim Raynor | Fiction |
| 2 | REBEL'S YELL: Chapter I | Fiction |
| 3 | REBEL'S YELL: Chapter II | Fiction |
| 4 | REBEL'S YELL: Chapter III | Fiction |
| 5 | REBEL'S YELL: Prologue | Fiction |
The following are comments posted by this user:
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#1. Posted on January 23, 2007 02:22 AM. I don't get it, sorry, I really wanna, but no.. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#2. Posted on January 23, 2007 02:18 AM. The hair-thingy, you forgot the hair thingy. very cool concept though, looks like something the protoss must have scrapped together for defence. -good- ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#3. Posted on January 23, 2007 02:09 AM. Awsum ::  ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#4. Posted on December 14, 2006 02:12 AM. I'll give you an good for MS paint and effort. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#5. Posted on December 14, 2006 02:11 AM. He he, I lilke it, but only when combined with the other. Good. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#6. Posted on December 14, 2006 02:06 AM. How come all terrans in CS are so ugly bugly? Anyways, Exp ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#7. Posted on December 05, 2006 08:00 AM. That certainly took you hella'lot time dude...
Don't worry... ^__^ ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#8. Posted on December 05, 2006 07:52 AM. For paint? EXP as always. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#9. Posted on December 05, 2006 07:36 AM. W00000000000000000000000000000000000000000t!!!!!! THAT'S AWSUM - I gotta get me one of these... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#10. Posted on December 04, 2006 05:31 AM. He's got rings on his nipples? O.o Wow... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#11. Posted on December 04, 2006 05:28 AM. Hmmm, the bubbles are placed weirdly, and thisa is not funny, so I expect it to be awsum in some way... Keep 'em coming son. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#12. Posted on December 04, 2006 05:25 AM. Avg for paint. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#13. Posted on December 04, 2006 05:22 AM. O.o Paint? Good. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#14. Posted on December 04, 2006 05:21 AM. Agree with McNewgin. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#15. Posted on December 04, 2006 05:17 AM. HAHA HJA HA HA ^-^ Well, the picture in itself wasn't that good, not the joke either, but the concept was, and when he mistook it for a scourge and you told him it was a drone... priceless... *laughs head off* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRGHHH!!! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#16. Posted on December 03, 2006 04:40 AM. He he, good to see 'em all gathered... ^^ ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#17. Posted on December 03, 2006 04:34 AM. DT's blades ARE short newbies (well, nobody's newbie in SC any longer, but still...) EXP ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#18. Posted on December 03, 2006 04:32 AM. If I had understood what the fuck it was, then maybe I'd given it exp, but it's good for now. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#19. Posted on November 30, 2006 07:43 AM. Naaiisssssssss... ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#20. Posted on November 30, 2006 07:39 AM. THe 'rines arms look 'tarded, like he ain't got any arms. But the rest was cool though.Good. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#21. Posted on November 30, 2006 07:37 AM. Practice needed... but funny.. ^__^ ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#22. Posted on November 30, 2006 07:35 AM. Hell, I liked the "I need a new agent" part.  And a bit of the gay-part.
But next time, try to keep your comics together in one strip. ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#23. Posted on November 30, 2006 07:29 AM. To quote Ultrazealot: "HOME HOME HOME!! Aiur...  "
Yeah, the only place to live, tranquil forests, nice lakes and big seas. I'd just had to organize an invasion to take it back from ravenous zerg that is ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#24. Posted on November 25, 2006 06:18 AM. I still think the zerg ios going to get pwned 
Just because the protoss and terrans in the middle are so friggin awesome. überpwnage!! ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#25. Posted on November 25, 2006 06:12 AM. Nasty.... Exp ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#26. Posted on November 25, 2006 06:04 AM. NOOOOOO!!!! THE POOR APPLE!!!!! AAAARGH!!!! he he, lol, exp fo' sho' ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#27. Posted on November 25, 2006 06:01 AM. He he, but I like it though (no, not because of that, n00bs) I'll give it good, although it'sd somewhere between good and average. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#28. Posted on November 25, 2006 05:53 AM. DarkLstrike, you n00b! It's taken from the side! (obviously) And even if it doesn't look exactly like the cruiser, I'd say it was a good shot. Good. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#29. Posted on November 25, 2006 05:50 AM. (Looks like he didn't vote after all, heh.) I like it, I really do, so it's exp from me, the only thing I can say though, is that a gasmask not covering the nose is not an effective one ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#30. Posted on November 25, 2006 05:46 AM. Somewhere between good and exp, I let the doubt get the better of me though. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#31. Posted on November 25, 2006 05:36 AM. Yeah, you've got it K'tan I won't vote either. (It wasn't THAT bad for a droodle though ) ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#32. Posted on November 24, 2006 02:17 AM. Not good, no effort, no details, sorry dude. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#33. Posted on November 21, 2006 01:59 AM. he he. Anyways, I think the other one was bettah. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#34. Posted on November 21, 2006 01:56 AM. Well, what can I say, it's nice enough, I'll give it averasge. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#35. Posted on November 07, 2006 02:02 AM. I gave exceptional, cause it was awesome, but I stil think the head is a bit too little "protossish" ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#36. Posted on November 06, 2006 05:16 AM. Very good for paint, maybe a bit too scetchy though. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#37. Posted on November 06, 2006 05:15 AM. Simply perfect, the picture says it all. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#38. Posted on November 06, 2006 05:14 AM. I like the idea of Judicators getting more into the fray, I've xcetxges for a "Judicator Chaplain" unit somewhere. Because I think some judicators are ashamed of whgat their caste did. *nodses* - Yours truly, Lord of Donuts ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#39. Posted on November 06, 2006 05:08 AM. When you sit there, confident in your defenses, and suddenly a horde of siege tanks, lurkers, battelcruisers, ultralisks, carriers, guardians swarms over you. Man, that's spooky. I think I just wet my pants ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#40. Posted on October 28, 2006 01:27 PM. Wow, he looks like the rine from the old cinematics from SC, not really natural, but sooo neat. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#41. Posted on October 28, 2006 01:25 PM. I sooooo agreee with Crabtasterman! (comment #5) It looks so much like the original, dark works of Metzen (w00t!) The only thing I can see that's not good is the fact that the background's too dominant. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#42. Posted on October 28, 2006 01:22 PM. AWESOME!!!! BEYOND EXCEPTIONAL!!! TRULY MAGNIFICENT!! LEGO FTW!!! - well, that pretty much said it, I guess. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#43. Posted on October 28, 2006 01:16 PM. I concur with ITSTORRASQUE4U, the hind wings are shorter, other than that; exp. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#44. Posted on October 28, 2006 01:08 PM. OMG!! AWSUM!!! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#45. Posted on October 28, 2006 12:55 PM. W00t!!! He's hawt! (No, I'm not gay, but most faces I draw looks like 'tards) Yeeehaw!! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#46. Posted on October 28, 2006 12:53 PM. Wow, that's imba coming from Microsoft Paint! awesome! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#47. Posted on September 13, 2006 06:21 AM. Happy birthdaY Rhino! I'm a bit late, but, who cares! Free cake!!!One!!11!!! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#48. Posted on September 02, 2006 07:08 AM. Yarthun watched as the battle was fought, he rubbed his fist against each other. THis was ridicilous, they had almost been eradicated by each other for N'nd time. the tall Praetor turned around and walked away. <not today my brethren> he telepathed <not today.> so he left to retrieve his holy armour, and rally what warriors he could. He barely remembered to pinch one of the passing maidens on the appendages, and resisted the need of doing something else to her.
<en Tar ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#49. Posted on September 02, 2006 06:53 AM. I just realized how well the title fit the chapter, Ha! Didn't really realize that before now. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#50. Posted on August 25, 2006 09:12 AM. Yeah I get it, but I hope the next part will be gory enough for you. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#51. Posted on August 23, 2006 01:10 PM. Yay! I knew I was right to give you the benefit of doubt! This was very good, really good. the description was from a personal view and both chaotic and accurate at the same time. Even this seems to have nothing to do with starcraft, I like it. I like alot. Actually I would like to get some political information in the next episode. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#52. Posted on August 23, 2006 11:48 AM. Well, the story was a bit shallow, there were little real description (from the man's view) and little real emotions (except for the All-of-my-friends-were-killed-because-of-me-stuff) And I dunno if this is safely inside StarCraft universe, there is no Royal Army of Earth, and that is not the way they make ghosts. But then, whattaheck, I'll give you Good, and I'lll give you the benefit of doubt. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#53. Posted on August 23, 2006 11:06 AM. Yeah, it's a chapter that needs a bit much dialogue to drive the plot forwards. the next chapter will contain more battle description and in-depth feelings. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#54. Posted on August 21, 2006 01:49 PM. The grammar was wery bad, but the idea with a peptalk from a hydralisk consisting of; "Food, yay!!" is brilliant. I'll give you the benefit of doubt. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#55. Posted on August 21, 2006 01:46 PM. simple, but not very funny. I like the zerg swearing though. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#56. Posted on August 21, 2006 01:45 PM. They're damn good, not perfect, but I'll guess they'll never be. The only thing i wonder abou is the woird lights in the crystals. I would've fixed that if I were you. However, I'm obviously not. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#57. Posted on August 21, 2006 01:39 PM. Yeah! that pic was good! I'll ditto with the first two ones. And a warm welcome from AzureWrath - Lord of Donuts. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#58. Posted on August 21, 2006 07:09 AM. AAAAAAAAAArrghh! It seemed so funny, but I can't see it!! AAAAAAAAAArrghh! *head explodes* ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#59. Posted on August 21, 2006 07:07 AM. ooohh, isn't it romantic? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#60. Posted on August 21, 2006 07:04 AM. Heh he! THat's a good one, simple, nonsensical, but that's the way we like 'em. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#61. Posted on August 21, 2006 07:01 AM. Really good. Althoigh the legs should've been more bent backwards at the "opposite knees". Really good. HT FTW! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#62. Posted on August 16, 2006 10:39 AM. THis poll is TOO DAMN OLD!!! we need a new one ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#63. Posted on August 15, 2006 06:12 AM. The color-scheme is completely wrong and its back's shark-fin should be taller up than the head. I'll give it good. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#64. Posted on August 14, 2006 06:41 AM. Nevermind. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#65. Posted on August 14, 2006 06:40 AM. No, seriously. I'll listen, but remember, I can't promise anything. As for my bilingual part; "Ikke be meg holde kjeft, ellers skal jeg tuppe deg i ballene din lille mongo." Translate that. AzureWrath, Lord of Donuts ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#66. Posted on August 14, 2006 06:31 AM. It's a start. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#67. Posted on August 14, 2006 06:28 AM. There's no difference. THat I can see. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#68. Posted on August 14, 2006 06:27 AM. Looks like a picasso, you never know what angle you look from. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#69. Posted on August 14, 2006 06:22 AM. If that's a terran invasion, what's the protoss base doing on terran asphalt? heh. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#70. Posted on August 14, 2006 06:13 AM. Damn good, were did you learn to draw like that? voted exp, by the way, wasn't any higher alternative. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#71. Posted on August 14, 2006 06:06 AM. That is incredible, top ten of what I've ever seen here. .............. .............. ............. I'm in shock... exceptional. Damn Pharazon... That's great. _AzureWrath, Lord of Donuts. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#72. Posted on August 14, 2006 05:59 AM. ADIUM! IT'S "Adun toridas" Pull yourself together man! (just check out sclegacy) - AzureWrath, Lord of Donuts. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#73. Posted on August 14, 2006 05:55 AM. Oooh, greek letters... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#74. Posted on August 14, 2006 05:29 AM. I don't know if we know each other or have interacted, but it would be an honour to be placed alongside my peers on the next version. AzureWrath out. voted good btw. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#75. Posted on August 14, 2006 05:21 AM. Pretty obvious. Nice to get it stated though. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#76. Posted on August 14, 2006 05:00 AM. but... but... I thought he was like a part of the inventory here? I didn't know him, but: "WAIT DONT SHOOT" will never be forgotten. Never I'll tell you! And yes, let's lay this thing dead now. He'll be back, they all do that. Sooner or later. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#77. Posted on August 14, 2006 04:55 AM. He he, butt-homour... he he. BTW, if YOU had been out killing aliens all day and several of your friends had been mangled and left behind on some foreign world, wouldn't you like to see a flower too? He he, exp. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#78. Posted on August 14, 2006 04:51 AM. You put it right NastyApe (comment #7) Exactly the same. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#79. Posted on August 13, 2006 10:48 AM. Wow, something canged while I was gone. Where's my porn-producing executor? He had a sweet deal. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#80. Posted on August 13, 2006 10:47 AM. The best title I've seen in ages, let's just hope the story is up to speed. I'll read the thing soon. promise. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#81. Posted on August 13, 2006 10:44 AM. The "not-so-long-awaited" sequel to Rebel's Yelll has finally been posted. Hope you can be able to enjoy it. Might need some updates. Seriously, my internet's been whacked for more than a month, so, let's just hope that chapter four might be posted sooner. Enjoy. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#82. Posted on August 13, 2006 06:48 AM. Eh... It's been a long time, and I haven¨t had proper internet since more than one-and-a-half month, so... It'sa coming. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#83. Posted on August 13, 2006 06:43 AM. Okeeeeeeeey... are you a girl with PM? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#84. Posted on July 02, 2006 07:36 AM. Yarthun finished a rather nasty scene with three young Khalai maidens, whithout going into details. Zemob stood by the Executor with a sad expression on his face. Too the degree where protoss could look sad. "My dear Zemob, what is wrong?" Yarthun said, while cleaning off some... You don't want to know*. Zemob pulled the Executor close and explained; "No one has made a move towards the conclusion yet. No scouting forces except that damn wraiths, no zergs running rampant, not U ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#85. Posted on July 02, 2006 07:18 AM. COPY-PASTE FTW!!! ehm.. sorry, but that's the feeling I got... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#86. Posted on July 02, 2006 07:15 AM. Yeah, listen to Geckat. Don't shout it's rude. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#87. Posted on July 02, 2006 06:45 AM. Weird, this is on the "popular" list but it's not getting any comments or votes. Weird. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#88. Posted on July 01, 2006 05:27 AM. I really can't find out what sucks about it... Can someone please give me a hint? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#89. Posted on June 30, 2006 04:06 PM. worse than the original. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#90. Posted on June 30, 2006 03:58 PM. The Concept of a zerglingshredding its way througfh something and then making a sc-poster of it is great. But the effort is more so/so. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#91. Posted on June 30, 2006 03:53 PM. It was too long as other guys pointed out, but you're getting the hang of it soon ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#92. Posted on June 30, 2006 03:42 PM. That was funny as heck!, I for once liked the orc ending And the not-so-subtle comment from the dragoon. the Dragoon said that it's death, beacuse he's been nearly killed to be in that dragoon. FUNNY!! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#93. Posted on June 30, 2006 03:25 PM. It was funny, but not very though. Here's a tip; Keep practice! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#94. Posted on June 30, 2006 03:16 PM. Better than the last one at least ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#95. Posted on June 30, 2006 02:53 PM. That was actually a bit more funny. But be careful using Dawn of War screenshots to make these comics, it's risky. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#96. Posted on June 30, 2006 02:42 PM. The only thing that was funny was the; "I dunno" reply, it was exactly as nonsenic as we needed, else... Nt good, sorry. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#97. Posted on June 30, 2006 02:35 PM. I agree with Master Ketchup, it looks like an infested protoss WARP-gate (not gateway) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#98. Posted on June 30, 2006 02:24 PM. How come, when two guys have voted "good" it says that "of two votes, most think this is EXCEPTIONAL" Beats me. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#99. Posted on June 30, 2006 02:00 PM. Nobody can ever hope to read all this in one evening! But I like your story though. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#100. Posted on June 30, 2006 01:50 PM. Yarthun sent the Khalai maiden out of his room, and the servant probe with along with her. He the returned to more serious tasks. Dark Templar Zemob and High Templar Kal'Tar entered the room from another entrance. The Executor greeted them and sat down. The Dark Templar was the forst one to greet him; "Greetings Executor Yarthun. I see thou gave that Khalai maiden some hot lovin eyh?" Yarthun smiled; "Yes Zemob, she got what was coming to her. I see you men are as eager as a ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#101. Posted on June 30, 2006 10:35 AM. (OT: This is going WAy of scedual! Keep it civil pleace!) Yarthun sat withjin the newly warped in Archives on Inzurense, the neighbouring planet to Tanoth. He wondered; "What was that creature? What had it been doing with that zergling?" His line of thoughts was ended by the usual Khalai maiden that entered to clean his room. Yarthun commanded a probe-servant to start its recorder, and Yarthun began to make another episode of "Dirty Khalai Maidens" which was the rea ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#102. Posted on June 29, 2006 08:35 AM. Mvouhaha!! That was more funny, but it should've ended with the marine coming back from the explosion; "I'm going to the Medic anyway." "Pussy." ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#103. Posted on June 29, 2006 08:20 AM. Exactly, but I won't vote though, as it is the work of Samwise and everybody knows that it is an "Exceptional" Go Samwise! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#104. Posted on June 29, 2006 05:44 AM. Averag, but heck, it's as good as I could've drawn. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#105. Posted on June 29, 2006 05:37 AM. Well, this was BAD. But not irrepairable (pretend I typed that right) First; Make the speech in thir own ""s; Ex; "Hey John! Care for a swim?" Second; Paragraphs, yeah you NEED paragraphs. Change paragraph everytime you change Subject/view/place etc... THird; Grammatical Errors. They screw things up. A tip; Cut and paste into Word (or another text program with spell-check) fix the errors. Then, convert back to a simpler text program, and THEN back into this pa ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#106. Posted on June 29, 2006 05:11 AM. THanks Archaon. And by the way, Read the Story of Goren guys! It's really entertaining and by mine standards, original. And fun!  ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#107. Posted on June 29, 2006 04:41 AM. THAT'S MASTER CHIEF FOR SURE!! Erhm... Sorry... Anyways, NastyApe is wrong BIGTIME, the guns rock, but you have to enlargen it. The Dude looks awesome too, but the background.. I don't know, it ain't important anyhow so I'll give you an Good. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#108. Posted on June 29, 2006 04:26 AM. Moooooooh!!!!! Ha! Gottcha All! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#109. Posted on June 28, 2006 12:36 PM. Executor Yarthun arose from his bathtub. A sexy-as-**** protoss maid stood by his side, standing ready with a towel. Yarthun began flirting with the young female. And just as he was about to pull a number, one of the zealots entered; "Executor! A human scout force has arrived!!" ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#110. Posted on June 28, 2006 12:11 PM. Man, I love Batman. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#111. Posted on June 28, 2006 12:01 PM. WoW! I haven't seen JimRaynor since before I joined! I'll vote "Good", but it's more likely something imbetween good and that below. Anyway, I like it because it's basic. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#112. Posted on June 28, 2006 11:52 AM. More; YAY! Less: Blah Blah *Good* ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#113. Posted on June 28, 2006 11:43 AM. If he had done it more funny in every aspect (like the Char-bar thingy) I could've voted "Good" actually. But the it would've been a totally different poem though... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#114. Posted on June 28, 2006 11:37 AM. HA HA HA!!! LOL!! ROFLMAO!! LMAO!! ROFL!! Yeah, yeah, you get the point. That was very funny. especially with the; "la la la, I'm just going to betray all of your sorry asses! Don't look Duke!" Duke: "OK, is it a surprise?" Fenix: "Yay!" Can I have some too?" You get the picture. I love nonsense humor. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#115. Posted on June 27, 2006 11:48 AM. W00T, that's beyond EXP. Truly magnificent if I dare use such powerful words!! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#116. Posted on June 27, 2006 11:11 AM. Humm, Humm, ha ahah, ahh... HA HA HA!!!! That was good. "Berg? Det var er hastig ord for noe som har stått der siden verden ble formet. Jah, svært hastig." - Treskjegg Fangorn. Translate THAT. (Alert me when you have. ) ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#117. Posted on June 27, 2006 10:40 AM. (OT: DAMN YOU ALL! for not letting me know what was going on... Very well, here we go 
When the probes entered the world closest to Tanoth, they entered a harsh, swamp-like lungle. The planet, once settled by protoss frontiersmen and -women had a name the protoss shivered in fear from; Inzurense. It reminded them of horrors unbelievable, and yet; they were here. Despite fear, and despite their dwindling numbers. When Praetor Artanis had learned of the terrans' plans, he had not been slow to ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#118. Posted on June 26, 2006 05:49 AM. AAAAAAAAAAARRRGGGGHHH!!!! THE STORY IS GOOOONE!! OMFG Y R U SO N00bz I PWNZ U ALLz, GIMP D-lux!! I'm just kidding around. Anyway, I don't know what story was here so... I'll just leave. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#119. Posted on June 26, 2006 05:43 AM. I would like to see one of the cyborgs later, but more importantly; Bradley. 'cause he's cool. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#120. Posted on June 26, 2006 05:39 AM. Am I the only one who has voted on this!!!??!!?? THAT'S PROPOSTEROUS!! (pretend I typed that right) The guy needs votes!! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#121. Posted on June 26, 2006 05:34 AM. Well, a bit short, and not much events, however, the contact with the protoss was awesome in itself. BTW, Nakhthul has to be one curious protoss, for any other protoss I know would've tried to kill Goren as fast as possible. Anywaysa, in hope that this series will continue (for I am really looking forward to part 6) I'll give it a good. (PS. He's still talking a bit wird, Goren I mean.) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#122. Posted on June 26, 2006 05:14 AM. Ooooookeeeyy, that might mean something... I think it needs a makeover. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#123. Posted on June 25, 2006 04:25 AM. W000T w000T!!!1!!1! #10!! personal record! Anyways... I voted Chosen race/counters, but I now think that it is the counters that is most important. Although Macro would've come second place in my book. Nevertheless, I'm just a n00b compared to you guys here, since I haven't played SC in more than two years. (lost it somehow) But then of course; POWER OVERWHELMING!! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#124. Posted on June 24, 2006 10:34 AM. Thanks! Some might notice that I've changed a few bits, hopegully to the better. So, tell me if you like it! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#125. Posted on June 22, 2006 08:47 AM. No posts today either? Or no votes? Well, well.. I'd better get my ass moving to post part four ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#126. Posted on June 22, 2006 08:44 AM. Thanks! Guess there's a reason why you are staff! He he ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#127. Posted on June 21, 2006 01:58 PM. can someone teach me all the smileys? I know , but that's it...
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#128. Posted on June 21, 2006 01:49 PM. Avg, because of the overall. Good luck in the future. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#129. Posted on June 21, 2006 01:43 PM. "ensnare (hydra style)" WTF? Since when did hydras get the ensnare ability? (+other weirdings) Anyways, i'll give it good, but remember; IMBAAA!! BTW, there's no such thing as dragoon DNA, unless the protoss armors are made of biological things. /ghee, I'm such a dick ) ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#130. Posted on June 21, 2006 01:36 PM. seige sounds like german to me, just gessing, anyways, Good. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#131. Posted on June 21, 2006 01:27 PM. Completely pointless like the rest, but that's the deal isn't it? I'll vote Good, because of the sheer amount of jokes, and because I understand the idea. But please, delete some of the others, you have like 3 part 2 or sumthin. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#132. Posted on June 21, 2006 12:51 PM. EVRYBODY LISTEN!! THESE ARE FACTS: ---------------Important------------------------- Earth is the seat of the UED, and it's probably heavily fortified, BUT they definately have dozens of planets colonized too. If a bunch of rag-tag rednecks could take over Koprulu sector, then I'll be damned if those Fascist dudes couldn't take over a similar system. The Xel'Naga wasn't all killed, some of them was yes, but not all, and they've had probably almost a cenrury to clear this up. (befor ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#133. Posted on June 21, 2006 12:29 PM. Yeah, yeah... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#134. Posted on June 21, 2006 08:56 AM. The reason no one knows anything about the others or the plot IS BECAUSE THE STORYLINE KEEP GETTING RESET!!!!! well, that's just my opinion ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#135. Posted on June 20, 2006 04:23 PM. Hilarious!! ROFLMAO!! keep 'em coming! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#136. Posted on June 20, 2006 04:18 PM. Well... that was disappointing compared to the other hilarious funny things you have made. Would've been funny If you had inserted the following text: "Timmy the Drone looks carefully around before breaking every StarCraft rule in the book, he has been spanbked by the Cerebrate before." LOL ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#137. Posted on June 20, 2006 04:07 PM. It looks like a wallpaper to me. And it's not that bad! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#138. Posted on June 20, 2006 03:24 PM. this funny! complteely nonsence, but that's exactly why it is si funny! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#139. Posted on June 20, 2006 03:02 PM. Dudes, that was actually quite funny, so shut up. I got it, so then everybody has to get it. I'll vote good (besides, theres something called "luck" in combat, maybe hydra B had a lucky shot?) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#140. Posted on June 20, 2006 02:55 PM. The Dominion is actyally quite strong, probably stronger than the Protoss, does "Starcraft: Ghost" say you anything #108? Even so, Shakuras is protected by a shield that kills any zerg on the planet immideately (pretend that i typed that right). The protoss or terrans has any chance to win, and even so I'm not going to get involved in this, because no matter what we say, Blizz decides BIG TIME so I'll just give up and leave it to Blizz. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#141. Posted on June 20, 2006 10:59 AM. Maybe we had to post the description of our caracter as a personal message to Geckat, and then if he approved he respended: "OK" and then we were allowed to enter the PFR in a smooth way. Just a thought. If we are going to go serious that is. ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#142. Posted on June 20, 2006 08:06 AM. --------"I have officially read comment #104"-------- is that ridicolus or what? ... ... ... ... Just don't kill me. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#143. Posted on June 19, 2006 04:20 PM. *Insert Theme song of Battlefield Vietnam Here (the Cinematic)* The G.O.Ds and the Jedi Taskforce Army leveled the zerg defenses of Canada, and soon arrived at BG's main hive, where he had soldified hgis position, succesfully rooting the Overmind there too. As the heroes ventured fowrards to the Hive, standing at the side of each other, with the setting sun in the back and moving in slow motion, the camera zoomed in on AzureWrath; "Time to make this PFR stop." The other g ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#144. Posted on June 18, 2006 02:50 PM. Mvouhahaha!! Post nr. 70!! personal reckord!! I'm soooo good. I'm not going to give this poll any of my time, 'cause I won't speculate, Blizz does exactly as they want to anyway Oops, I guess I did after all, LoL ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#145. Posted on June 18, 2006 12:25 PM. Read the strategy one more time, he has that covered LOL!! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#146. Posted on June 18, 2006 12:01 PM. I just HAD to do this; Name; Byrne, Jason Age; 37 standard sycles Height; 1,83 m. Weight; 69,5 kg. Hair; blonde, very short. Eyes; grey. Bio; Jason Byrne was born on Tarsonis in a time of economical growth, unfortunately this also caused a overpopulation of the Tarsonian system. Thousands were shipped out to the outlying colonies, in particular Chau Sara. Jason was in the beginning of his nineteens when he was conscripted into the Confederate Marine Corps, which mostly consisted of cr ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#147. Posted on June 18, 2006 08:27 AM. "- you feel turned on by the medic/valkery pilot's voice" Herrrmm... I think I've played too much SC, he he... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#148. Posted on June 17, 2006 05:21 PM. So, AzureWrath left his room in the G.O.D. fortress. It was protected by several companies of JTFA, Raynors Raiders (which after this sick war really was most of the terrans left alive) and Silverscreen's Jedi. AzureWrath and his bodyguard; Flametrooper and Sgt. Jones & His Fat Marines left for shpping, after all, Azure's trenchcoat was ruined, and they needed the day off. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#149. Posted on June 15, 2006 01:16 PM. Why "too late"? AS usual nobody is going to win, as always... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#150. Posted on June 15, 2006 08:44 AM. Yep, you're right. And I intend to develop these chapters as I get hints and advices. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#151. Posted on June 15, 2006 02:52 AM. It seems to me that zerg has an disadvantage, but whattaheck. Geckat is imba anyway. I couldn't get in either BTW. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#152. Posted on June 15, 2006 02:44 AM. The might of the Penis can NEVER be denied; it allows us pee standing, and wetting our legs or sumthin'. I meant NOT wetting ourselves. ghee... I'm getting old. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#153. Posted on June 15, 2006 02:35 AM. Yeah, I really think a poem about Raynor (hugs a picture of him) should be exceptional, no matter who wrote it, so I'm going to work, and work, and work on it until it gets almost perfect. Because Jim's worth it ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#154. Posted on June 15, 2006 02:31 AM. What can I say?
I'll do something with it.
BTW, I'm not a english speaking guy, so words like "inexplicable, obnoxious, disgraceful" etc etc. are not words that I remeber while writing. (not that I've needed THESE particular words, but you get the point) ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#155. Posted on June 15, 2006 02:29 AM. He he he, it wasn't me, it was that damn Word2003, it really loves semi colons. So, since I hate those green ^^^^^^ thingies under my words, i gave Word the advantage of doubt. As for the plot, you'll wait and see, people think they're going to get everything on a silver plate immediately, however, what I really want, is people to get an "A-HA!" experience later when I show them more of the plot. I'll reread it as soon as possible, trust me. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#156. Posted on June 15, 2006 02:22 AM. I just wanted to show how eccentric these guys really were. As for Magellan, I reckoned that he needed to be a powerful individual of some kind to become a cyborg, so I considered experimenting with ghost initiates would be in the style of the confederacy. Not that Magellan is very powerful psychic, his powers are probably more in the direction of huuuuge calculating and observing powers, hence the fact that he reads the nametag of a soldier he's never going to meet again. But it may kill the fl ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#157. Posted on June 13, 2006 04:52 PM. Well, it seems that no one really remember where they were, sooo eeehhh... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#158. Posted on June 13, 2006 08:48 AM. LOL!!!! Andrarin you are godmodding!!! AS for me, I'll pretend that the Overmind still lives. Anyone with me? Azure flew his dropship towards the planet of Aiur, the psychical emanations of something sinister, something mssive had reached him. As the ship entered high orbit, Azure's lieutenant, Sgt. Jones (anyone remember him?) stared at the radar; "Sir, I think we have an object arriving from behind, it looks like a jedi transport." Azure smiled;"Flame... Let him come ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#159. Posted on June 13, 2006 08:05 AM. New poll, Geckat is imba. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#160. Posted on June 12, 2006 05:43 PM. That was great, it lacked a bit intensity though, but this is after all a prologue, and I'm waiting for the next chapter. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#161. Posted on June 12, 2006 01:43 PM. Protoss don't have their knees bent the other way, they just have very short thighs and very long feet (look at cats and such) exceptional anyway ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#162. Posted on June 12, 2006 01:35 PM. he he... it really did, AFTER you pointed it out. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#163. Posted on June 12, 2006 01:32 PM. It's "Adun toridas", just trying to get things right. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#164. Posted on June 12, 2006 01:29 PM. I haven't read the entire thing, want to read the first first, however, if you manage this, you DESERVE an exceptional, so I'll cross my fingers for you. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#165. Posted on June 12, 2006 01:24 PM. this page has been raped, it is too broad. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#166. Posted on June 12, 2006 01:15 PM. (ABC's base is the headquarters of "Letters", the faction that abcxyzzzz created, their forces consisting mainly of protoss and an elite guard of bionicles, plus some sc.org people, but i don't remeber who.) Azure arose from the ground, his face badly scarred and his body punished, the female jedi that he had seduced to get to the top (yeah, that's how I became the leader) flinched when they saw his new expression. "This means war, holy war, may the Light protect them from m ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#167. Posted on June 12, 2006 01:11 PM. Thanks Andarin! Nice to get some positive comments once in a while too, he he... (Not to criticize you other guys, I know u just weanna help, and I appreciate it.) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#168. Posted on June 12, 2006 10:26 AM. Azure valiantly fought the evil dudes, standing on his podium, he swinged his gauss rifle and his sabre in the other hand. Indeed, he was a formidable advesary, but alas, not his entire grace and purity (he had just changed underwear) could stem the wave of evil that poured forth from MaFiCuS. He shouted to his warriors; "Stand your ground! As long as we defend this planet it cannot fall! Stand by me my brethren! If they want to test our mettle, they shall see the fury and power that is our ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#169. Posted on June 12, 2006 07:22 AM. He he.. gottcha.. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#170. Posted on June 09, 2006 12:47 PM. seven levels i think, although i dunno really, so just forget that I posted this really... ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#171. Posted on June 09, 2006 04:41 AM. I liked it, very basic, and that's the way it should be. Good work Tom ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#172. Posted on June 09, 2006 03:58 AM. Excep, but it's kind of strange that even the terrans tend to speak like protoss, me thinks. Take the secretary;“Speak your wishes,” she said. Wouldn't it be more authentical if she had said;"What do you want?" or sumthin', i dunno. I'm just a guy from the cold north. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#173. Posted on June 08, 2006 11:07 AM. AzureWrath was dropped down inside the Infested Temple, to his great disappointment, inside the breeding pen of the kakaros, he stood up trying to find his way out of the bit uncomfortable and private situation (there were kakarpos everywhere mating) He opened a hatch, and stumbled in to a room where Tom and MaF was making out. "Oh my sweet Admin!!" Azure yelled out, before closing the hatch. Seeing his former good friend making out with an infested-castract.. errr-psycho-alien w ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#174. Posted on June 08, 2006 07:27 AM. Are you new K'tan? Thought you had been in the game a long time... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#175. Posted on June 08, 2006 06:50 AM. I'm really confused now, guess a PFR plot-line cannot ezist in harmony more than 60-90 posts. Nevertheless, when Flame saved Azure, Azure managed to get caught AGAIN by infested kakaros, and flewn to the Crashed Hive. Let's see what's happening Azure;"D'OH!!" ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#176. Posted on June 07, 2006 03:01 PM. As they wandered into the jungle, Flame encountered an eldritch sight; the Temple. Once the home of Hladras, but no one knew were he was now, wether he had redeemed for his sins, or lunged back at the owrld by his own, dark measures was unknown to the JTF, even though a division of the G.O.Ds they have had little contact with Corouscant lately, and frankly, both Azure and Flame had got enough of the noisy, drunk Padawan graduates for a long time to come. Flame stared a the strange, floating t ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#177. Posted on June 07, 2006 11:36 AM. Mine too, so I guess I am kind of exused. I promise to use more time on this one, as it is a little favorite of mine... he he.
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#178. Posted on June 07, 2006 11:28 AM. I did not triple post about lack of comments!!! I did a double of lack of voting, and one were I was thanking. Nope, no hat-trick about comments,
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#179. Posted on June 07, 2006 11:21 AM. About the moaning, read the post about it above, and the rest, thanks for feedback! always nice ti get some comments! Yours truly, Lord of Donuts ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#180. Posted on June 07, 2006 11:18 AM. Flush your toilet? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#181. Posted on June 07, 2006 06:31 AM. (OT: I think I'll stick to my super-gauss and sabre, instead of light sabres, no offence, but you know, this is supposed to be a SC fanfic
Azure watched as Haladras and/or SScreen yelled at Flame, he sighed and walked slowly towards the event;
Azure; "Eyh, guys, don't be mad with Flame, he's young and a bit in a need of whop ass, after all, he's one hell of a hotshot. Don't worry, I've been covering his ass, and he's been covering mine, and... Why the hell are we getting invaded by ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#182. Posted on June 06, 2006 03:00 PM. That was great, and BTW, when did Jim Raynor become a journalist? (see bottom) And the events of StarCraft are at least after 2200, maybe even after 2400, but it could be another timescale, i agree with Tom (as I usually do) "I give a good" 'nuff said ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#183. Posted on June 06, 2006 02:43 PM. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGHHHHHH, how come people never vote? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#184. Posted on June 06, 2006 02:36 PM. Hrmphf... I think we need to clear things up here a bit; 1. I am not a chick, dunno what made you believe that Flame, but no food for you before bedtime today. 2. Check out http://www.ultimateshowdown.org 3. We, the Good (but) Odd Guys (G.O.Ds) ARE the JTF, Haladras however stands alone, and the "Letters" faction seems to have been annhiliated or went undercovah! 4. This is supposed to be funny, amusing and intersting for everyone, so please play nicely with each other (not ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#185. Posted on June 06, 2006 05:00 AM. Please! Vote! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#186. Posted on June 06, 2006 04:57 AM. Please! Vote too! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#187. Posted on June 06, 2006 03:52 AM. Hhhhhhhhmmm, I would've liked if Haladras joined the G.O.D, but then he would've become a Sith wouldn't he? Hhhhhmmmm... Anyways, I'm gonna hang with Flame, that guy needs someone to take care of him, here I come Flame! (It's clobberin' time!!) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#188. Posted on June 06, 2006 02:40 AM. I agree with DocOc here, but I gotta say... THat was awesome!! I give an exp. I really liked the phraze with Wrothgar trying to find out how he could use the terran weapons, you know, Derrick's thought only answering about some girl, that was good, really really good Keep 'em coming, and listen to DocOc ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#189. Posted on June 06, 2006 02:03 AM. Hhhmmm, I understand that very good, and I will see if I am going to follow that up
As for the odd order of words, come on, this is poetry, we all know how weird poetry is allowed to sound.
Thanks anyway.
(war and star doesn't rhyme?, hmmmm... I gotta chew on that =)
There, I've changed the poem slightly, hopefully to the liking of you guys, personnaly I like the last line the best, even though it's a bit out of "rythm" ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#190. Posted on June 05, 2006 01:54 PM. Okay, here's the good guys: Champ; Small guy with an enormous recourcefullness Lurker; Dragon with feathers, do we need to say more? SS (SilverScreen); A jedi, do I need to say more Smasher25; Pilot, but has a secret liasion with abcxyzzz. yellow13; pilot, damn good. AzureWrath (azure); Looks like VanHelsing, but no long black hair, got a hat with a nearly unending supply of trinkets, modern legolas. (but not so gay looking )
FlameTrooper (Flame); Elite Ghost
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#191. Posted on June 05, 2006 12:22 PM. He he, thanks as always. ^^ ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#192. Posted on June 05, 2006 11:03 AM. EXP!! it was good, i agree with the rest, but that's just "flisespikkeri" as we say in norwegian. (which means that it's not much to worry about.) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#193. Posted on June 05, 2006 08:12 AM. Hhhhmmm, I don't think I like that you focus so much on his "zergishness", I would like to see him returned back to his cyborg-state, perhaps a cyborg-zerg hybrid? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#194. Posted on June 05, 2006 07:39 AM. I din't like the quick change, and the way Goren suddenly became so calm about his state, and the way he talked after he became a zerg. But still, it's an exp. just for the heck of it
(By the way, are there anything left of Goren's cyborg thingies? Would've been cool if he could both use zerg and terran techs)
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#195. Posted on June 05, 2006 07:15 AM. Hhhhhmmm... How old is Goren? In the bike scene i thought he was like nine or something, but then I thought he was nineteen or around that. But now... He has never been in the army? How come he knows everything there is to know about ranks and stuff? I would've liked it better if you had written in a boot camp for him. so that he could learn the ways of the military in a more normal way. BTW, is Bradley a cyborg too? I'd better read on, he he. Good. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#196. Posted on June 05, 2006 04:36 AM. Azure and Flame ran into the forest, SS followed them shortly after. somewhere in the air flew yellow13 and Lurker around fighting the incoming demons and cloned transvestite protoss ( )
the heroes managed to slip into a dark cave.
Azure sighed;"We're never going to kill these guys, we are SOOO doomed." the others nodded.
Flame, who was quite new to the gig asked carefully;"Shouldn't we have a quest or sumthin'?" The others noddod to this.
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#197. Posted on June 04, 2006 03:37 PM. If you're talking about the grammar in the conversations, yes, they are intended to be incorrect. I'm trying to catch the normal tune of conversation of these guys, otherwise I can't see much errors. (But I bet you do! ) ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#198. Posted on June 04, 2006 03:13 PM. Azure was utterly confused, DonTshoot had disappeared as well as Tom. His only comfort was that SS(or is he evil?), Champ and Lurker seemed to stand vigilant. The Jedi taskforce also came as a positive surprise, Corouscant was really far away. This elite ghost named flametrooper (from now to be named "flame" had supported them from the trees. Yellow13 was also a welcome sight.
He spun around just in time to avoid a zealot dressed up like a barbie doll. "My Admin! Haladras' ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#199. Posted on June 04, 2006 09:28 AM. Why? I think it pictures, especially Jason, perfect. (Even though it is the cover from "Speed of Darkness" mind you) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#200. Posted on June 04, 2006 07:28 AM. Can someone explain me what 1337 means? *blush* I'm an idiot, I know... *runs and hides* ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#201. Posted on June 04, 2006 07:21 AM. Hrmphf... Here too. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#202. Posted on June 04, 2006 07:19 AM. Is SpaceSepp a Norwegian? Would've been cool, I really hope he made it, cause it woul'dve sucked if he had stolen it. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#203. Posted on June 04, 2006 07:00 AM. HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! That b**ch, I see she uses dirty tactics, heh. Well well, that's the kind off assholes you gotta reckon with, no vote, but good try though... ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#204. Posted on June 04, 2006 06:46 AM. PharaZon, be nice now, calm down, slowly... Good boy... Now, as far as i get it, it's not the fact that it was 666 buildings (or maybe) but the fact that the other killed all, yet the first only lost 630, am I right? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#205. Posted on June 04, 2006 06:15 AM. (off topic: Huh? I thought the "vaguely hungarian guy" was one of your crew, hmmm, sorry.) (OT: Mvouhahaha, söta bror, här bliver det kult va? (In slightly primitive swedish)) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#206. Posted on June 04, 2006 06:05 AM. If someone is going to bug me with things like that battlecruisers don't have hangars, or that valcyries are faster than devourers, or that scourges don't get slower because they are damaged or that vacyries only have female crew... Don't do it. This is supposed to be realistic, and things are different from gaming and reality, there is something called luck too
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#207. Posted on June 04, 2006 03:13 AM. Thanks!! (Alot.) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#208. Posted on June 04, 2006 02:52 AM. Uuuuuuuuuhhhh, bloodbane? Could you take it easy with that kick-assing of yours? Haladra might not be the god-modder he used to be, but I think he's still pretty too darn good for anyone of us to handle alone. And BTW, I'm glad you guys finally have learnt to use my hat, but don't overdo it, ok? Anyways: "Bloodbane reached the site were the heroes valiantly fought the zealots, SS saw the fever infected face of bllodbane, and he used what forcepowers he could spare to heal. (is that ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#209. Posted on June 03, 2006 03:46 PM. Azure and the other heroes watched the body og Champ with great sorrow, nederbörd came close to Azure as he wept in honor of Champ's great memory (even though he was a small guy) "We gotta get outta here Azure" he said before pulling Azure up again, Lurker lifted the body of his old campanion up again, and laid it on his massive back. Tom cried out: "OMG!!! This entire temple is bloody well flying!" the heroes froze in panic, and before they could do anything, they hear ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#210. Posted on June 03, 2006 08:20 AM. It seemed as Nederbörd and his adventurers had ran just into the group of Azure, Champ, DontShoot, Bloodbane and Lurker. (any more?) He sighed heavily while he ventured forth to meet his old allies. They met, and Azure, after dressing again, whispered to Nederbörd: "My friend, we might have slight problem, Haladras has gone... mad." Nederbörd looked at the others and closed his eyes, the ragged gang consisting of a dragon with feathers (Lurker), a tiny guy who was recourcefull ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#211. Posted on June 03, 2006 04:14 AM. It was Azure, his large trenchcoat and broadbrimmed making him look either a goth or a witchhunter, however, he was neither. He pulled out of the hat a saber and challenged the Haldras to a fight of swordsmen, the two, obviously evenly odded, fought for hours, both losing strength over time, yet refusing to give up. Azure's hat was nocked off and his coat was ripped up, showing that he was quite young, and had short, blond hair. Haladras gritted his teeth, and prepared for the final blow t ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#212. Posted on June 02, 2006 10:58 AM. AzureWrath, Geckat and Champ, as well as the fat marines lead by the blobby Raynor (or was it the other way around?) went to find Tom, he was sitting and reading in the midst of a band of disco-zerglings. Geckat quickly jumped forwards and tuned the radio to Talk-shows-with-Emperor-Mengsk-Channel. suddenly he saw what book Tom was reading; "Ghee Tom! why...?" Tom became very defencive:"No! It's my book! I read what I want!! You'll never get it!! Noo!!" Champ:" ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#213. Posted on June 02, 2006 09:18 AM. Well, I get the point, but I don't think it affects the poem much. You, know, the freedom of the artist is quite big, and the commas are sometimes important, however, I think I'll let it be as it is for now... - Yours truly, Lord of Donuts ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#214. Posted on June 02, 2006 09:07 AM. I really didn't manage to read the entire story because of the wird markings, you should go over them, or convert it over to Wordpad or something, for it seems like a good story, then I'll return, and vote
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#215. Posted on June 02, 2006 09:02 AM. LOL!! That was funny, gave it good! Yours truly, Lord of Donuts ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#216. Posted on June 02, 2006 08:31 AM. #145, as always you're right Tom. I really hopes Raynor don't ends up as an emperor, I would like it better if Raynor defeated Kerrigan mano-a-mano, and then died, becoming a legend to mankind and patron of a new empire... That would be a cool twist... As always, Lord of Donuts, yours truly. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#217. Posted on June 02, 2006 07:03 AM. AzureWrath travelled along with the group of fat marines and Kopaka D. Nuva, even though everyone thought they were dead, he knew that an imposter had taken his place. Raynor: "Okay, so we're on Char now, and there are three groups, right?" Sgt. Jones: "Who are we going to join, I mean, many of our men remained to eat pancackes after Captain pancake infested the place." Azure: "That is an enemy whe must deal with later, perhapsd he has a good reason, now we must ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#218. Posted on June 01, 2006 01:54 PM. He he, keep it up man, I know you're just trying to help, no offence taken ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#219. Posted on June 01, 2006 11:00 AM. IF you are going to change between them however, you might to point that very clearly out, I had the same problem with Rebel's Yell. Anyway, I'll vote Below Avg, not to be a prick, but it could do some polishing. However, I'd like to see what happens next... - Lord of Donuts ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#220. Posted on June 01, 2006 10:50 AM. LOL (in a negative way) why this, may I ask? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#221. Posted on June 01, 2006 10:47 AM. Two thumbs up
I liked the way he was, and personnaly liked the way he died, maybe if you had thrown in something that had to do with a cerebrate or the overmind giving him the love he never got from his parents, have seen something like that been done before. ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#222. Posted on June 01, 2006 10:23 AM. It's really good! Except that the italics ruined abit, and the grammars it was a axcepteional. Something that surprised me every time was that he always had logical thought, I mean, when he became aware that he had hydralisk spines, he began wondering! That's good! And when the zergling joined him, and when he became more zerg, when he woke up from hibernation! He always wondered why! That's good! I've read enough stories were things just happen whithout the caracters asking questions about i ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#223. Posted on June 01, 2006 09:02 AM. Good point... I have considered and come to the point were I must disagree. You see, one might think that Janie's just a caracter I wrote in to make this scene sad, but it's not, if you read on, Janie's the cause for which Jason fought for, she's the reason he's going to fight. In the coming parts, you're probably going to notice that Janie is a reason to many a friendship between Jason and fellow officers (next time, read the entire story before you post, unless it sucks so much that ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#224. Posted on June 01, 2006 08:53 AM. Inside the McDonald's something hapened with the ashes of AzureWrath, they began to glow, and son a fiery figure appeared within them; AzureWrath. "Heed my words, mortals! I have returned to turn that which is wrong to right!!" Raynor, and his fat marines, as well as Seargant Jones mumbled something. AzureWrath: "Dammit Raynor! I said that you should guard them! And now you're sitting here ang growing even fatter! you lazy bastard!" Raynor: "Calm down Azury, ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#225. Posted on June 01, 2006 07:23 AM. Better now? (I used ages to find a picture i liked, color scheme that didn't suck and a format that was supported here...) ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#226. Posted on June 01, 2006 06:24 AM. Well, it was the most fitting picture, I didn't find anything more fitting, perhaps I'll fix it later... ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#227. Posted on May 31, 2006 01:17 PM. Aaargh... TWO DAYS, and no one's voted, what am I going to do..? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#228. Posted on May 31, 2006 11:49 AM. AzureWrath breathed heavily, he knew he was doomed, his lungs was not right... The pain was searing through his body like a thousand zerglings' claws. He concentrated, this could not last anymore, he had to use it... the power of the Newbie!! Even though AzureWrath was a guy who supposedly had a hat fulll of gadgets of all kinds that could be used in any situation, even though no one had used it, and he spent the most of his time marketing for his fan-fic (Rebel's Yell - Part 1) he still h ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#229. Posted on May 31, 2006 10:55 AM. Wow wow wow, people just don't seem to get the point, okay, here it is; STUKOV'S JOINED RAYNOR!!!!!!! Really, after a secret map (check out sclegacy.com if you don't believe me) Raynor and a dragoon hero was charged to cure stukov, who had been infested. It doesn't say anything about Stukov joining Raynor, but what choice did he have? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#230. Posted on May 30, 2006 01:47 PM. And thus enters the Newbie, Azure_Wrath, who is utterly confused by the three separate (or was it four?) storylines, he decides to assist the guys who are going to china in order to kill the old Xel'Naga guy, he loads his huge cowboy hat with all that he might need and convinces the huge Bionicle dude to join them in their valiant cause, mostly thank to his persuasive ailities, but also to the fact that Bionicle are notorious Gameboy (TM) playersw, and Azure_Wrath happened to have five different ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#231. Posted on May 30, 2006 06:56 AM. Kick arse! I'll be waiting for the rest, I'd really like to see a hardened terran soldier's experience with zerg troops, and a kind of scared Kerrigan in the end, perhaps he'll wander off to found his own brood? Azure_Wrath AKA Sir_Godspeed, Lord of Donuts. BTW, do any of you guys know if it is possible to add fan-fic on d2players? I have a pretty good idea about a story taken from the diablo universe, but I don't know if it's possible yet...
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#232. Posted on May 29, 2006 01:26 PM. Ha ha ha!! ROFLMAO!! That was great, even though the text was FU, maybe you should republish it without those weird signs? Removing them manually, or maybe converting it to WordPad? Anyways, it's not the best story I've ever heard in terms of (uh... what do you call it when the text "floats" properly?) ______, but it sure as hell is funny, exp in huomour!!!! I really wan't to see him again, remember, you can re-write the story's end!
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#233. Posted on May 29, 2006 11:07 AM. YeehaW!! exp for sure!! Yep, yep yep... "Humm humm, these hobbits? Humm, humm? Do they like bbq?" - Treebeard Fangorn ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#234. Posted on May 29, 2006 11:00 AM. Hahaha!!
Don't worry about that!!
Well, I'm not a native english speaker myself, so I use Word, actually I'm a norwegian, and we aren't really known for good english (just check out Thor Heyerdahl and Petter Solberg, some of the most known norwegians, yet they talk like... well, uh, norwegians I guess!
Thanks for the feedback anyway!! I'll be following your story too, with great interest! ...Click here to view this comment. |
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#235. Posted on May 29, 2006 10:48 AM. Finally, I was waiting for that to be revealed! If a bunch of rednec |