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The following are documents submitted by this user:

#	Document	Channel
1	A Mix of Different Terrans	Strategies
2	A Mix of Different Terrans #2	Strategies
3	A Mix of Different Terrans #3	Strategies
4	General Hawkins and Infested Adam	Fiction
5	General Hawkins and Infested Adam #2	Fiction
6	General Hawkins and Infested Adam #3	Fiction
7	General Hawkins and Infested Adam #4	Fiction
8	General Hawkins and Infested Adam #5	Fiction
9	General Hawkins and Infested Adam Final	Fiction
10	General Hawkins New Era: Prologue	Fiction
11	General Hawkins: Ghost	Fiction
12	Number One	Fiction

The following are comments posted by this user:

#1. Posted on July 25, 2007 10:16 AM. It's an alright story. Just keep working on it. Perhaps look more into the technicality of the game and such. And that's pretty much it. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#2. Posted on July 25, 2007 10:12 AM. Um...what can I say? It's all been said. Never mind. I'm leaving. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#3. Posted on July 25, 2007 10:10 AM. Um....my parents long ago told me that if "I don't have anything nice to say, don't say it at all." So...no comment. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#4. Posted on July 25, 2007 10:07 AM. That is beautiful. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#5. Posted on July 25, 2007 10:00 AM. Amazing. I mean, I write StarCraft stories. But they're never, EVER this good. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#6. Posted on July 15, 2007 08:27 AM. That was funny and refreshing. We could use more comedic stuff liek this around SC.org. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#7. Posted on July 15, 2007 08:19 AM. This piece by all means was certainly nothing great. It felt like it was being written in journal form, but had too many elements contradicting that that I don't know what it felt like anymore. The description was fair; it looks like a beginning piece. Keep writing though; I'm eager to see more of your work (improved, of course). AVERAGE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#8. Posted on June 13, 2007 09:05 AM. Sorry...I got a little excited there. *Grabs inhalor* I'm all better now. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#9. Posted on June 11, 2007 05:11 AM. Thanks for the criticism. I'll work on my next one and make it better. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#10. Posted on June 04, 2007 07:27 PM. Well then, keep it up. It's always nice to have another writer here at SC.org. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#11. Posted on June 02, 2007 09:02 AM. Okay guys, let's calm down here. X9, I'm surprised at you. You're much more experienced than to continue with arguments with other users, no matter how new they are. I'm grateful that you do not lose your temper, though. It's a sign of great maturity. To GanthridorII, let's take some constructive criticism and move on, shall we? I wholeheartedly agree with your "freethinking" view on things, but when somebody like X9 talks, you listen. He's head and shoulders above many people here o ... Click here to view this comment.

#12. Posted on June 02, 2007 08:55 AM. Um...it was okay. I liked it, although the grammatical rehash was a bit overbearing. I'll vote a GOOD. And I don't believe I've met you before! I'm now one of the more "veteran-but-not-as-active" users around here. Only have 208 posts. Anyway, keep writing. The plotline is a bit weak, and the rehash is a bit annoying, but if you work at it, you'll get much better. As I said before, GOOD -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#13. Posted on June 02, 2007 08:46 AM. Thanks for the kind words, guys. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#14. Posted on May 26, 2007 10:56 AM. You didn't upload it here, I typed it up for you while you read it to me yesterday. Silly goose. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#15. Posted on May 23, 2007 01:23 PM. Hey, it's our Vanguard from the project! Remember me, gregleo2 from the Sons of War project? I was the original website designer. I'm also a biography compiler and general helper. I've got to give this an EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#16. Posted on May 23, 2007 01:13 PM. I can do pretty much anything HTML if anyone needs it, but I think we should just keep the two sites together. Adad64 and I run a website business, so we can work really well together. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#17. Posted on May 22, 2007 08:34 PM. I liked the first one. I loved the second one. The third one now PWNS. Rye, you are now on my favorite writers list, along with X9 and mutalisk332. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#18. Posted on May 21, 2007 08:20 PM. Lol, X9. I like seeing that you take your new role as a staff member seriously. Remember when we were newbies just like Ganthridor? Now Ganthridor II, I said that your series was to become MORE successful than mine, not LESS. I liked your story, and I guess I didn't express that clearly enough. ... Click here to view this comment.

#19. Posted on May 21, 2007 08:16 PM. Lol, adad64. Just remember, that the four times we played each other in StarCraft, I kicked your tiny butt every time. (I am a Korean.) -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#20. Posted on May 20, 2007 07:22 PM. Dude, you can't vote for yourself like that. It's cheating. I know because I learned it the hard way. The story (more like a prolouge), however, was very nicely written. Few grammatical errors, and a decent spinoff plotline. This should turn out into a successful series, unlike my series did...it failed in the third chapter. I was going to give this story a GOOD, but because of the phantom vote, I'll have to vote AVERAGE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#21. Posted on May 07, 2007 07:07 PM. Not bad...a bit cartoony, but not bad... GOOD -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#22. Posted on May 07, 2007 07:06 PM. WHO CARES?!!! -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#23. Posted on May 07, 2007 07:02 PM. It's been quite a while since I've been on here, and this is a nice piece of work to be able to come back to. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#24. Posted on March 25, 2007 11:35 AM. Congrats, all. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#25. Posted on March 15, 2007 07:42 PM. Wow. It's been a while since I was on here. I see my strategy has been overthrown... The strategy was very good. Continue to write more. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#26. Posted on February 27, 2007 04:36 PM. A whopping 7-8 years. My dad introduced the game to me before I could walk. That sounded so nerdy... Oh well. It's true, anyways. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#27. Posted on February 27, 2007 04:33 PM. Thanks. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#28. Posted on February 06, 2007 05:15 PM. Ohhhh, yeah. That's what I'm talking about. Loved the first one. Love this one too. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#29. Posted on February 04, 2007 06:56 AM. It's been fun having you on the site. We'll miss you. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#30. Posted on February 02, 2007 05:34 PM. 5Daimyo said everything in my mind. Enough said. NO VOTE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#31. Posted on February 02, 2007 06:52 AM. I'm somewhere in between you guys here. I've tried this strategy. A lot. It only works about 70% of the time, depending on the oppsing race(s) and circumstances. AVERAGE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#32. Posted on February 01, 2007 05:19 PM. Thanks, DocOc. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#33. Posted on February 01, 2007 06:51 AM. Yeah. No offense meant here, I mean you're still my best friend, but a typical comment from you is, "Great! EXP!" infest or be infested! It just wouldn't work. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#34. Posted on January 31, 2007 06:14 PM. Someone's been drinking a little too much caffeine.... -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#35. Posted on January 29, 2007 06:42 PM. Hmmm... I haven't been notified whether I've been accepted or rejected yet. Hopefully they haven't misplaced my application or something... -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#36. Posted on January 29, 2007 05:07 PM. Hmm...not as good as your Raynor's Raiders series, but overall typical great work from a great author. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#37. Posted on January 27, 2007 04:08 PM. I haven't been informed yet. Hope I make it anyway. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#38. Posted on January 25, 2007 06:05 PM. Protogod is right. Why would you even have more than one account? I don't. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#39. Posted on January 23, 2007 03:28 PM. Got a reply from Schwitzer. I have "been flagged for further consideration". Cool. ... Click here to view this comment.

#40. Posted on January 21, 2007 02:03 PM. BrotherGreen is right. They had like, 800 people apply when they did this in 1999. I didn't even have any clue that Starcraft.org had that many members. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#41. Posted on January 20, 2007 09:03 AM. @Torrasque: The Wii is great; Twilight Princess is even better. @the poll: I'm not going to believe. It's so inconsequential yet full of it's own virute and too far off in the future that we'll have to wait before getting excieted like this. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#42. Posted on January 20, 2007 08:55 AM. Holy heck. I wish I had your artistic ability, brother. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#43. Posted on January 19, 2007 09:08 PM. How beautifully poetic. This was a wonderful story. PLotline was nil, but that didn't matter. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#44. Posted on January 19, 2007 09:04 PM. Aside from the occassional grammatical error, this was great. Really great, in fact. Really really great. In fact, I feel compelled to give this an EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#45. Posted on January 19, 2007 03:18 PM. "ive moved from computer gaming to Xbox live. games like COD2, G.R.A.W., BatlleFeild, and soon to be Halo3. so i have something to do if it never comes out." Like X9, I fully concur. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#46. Posted on January 19, 2007 03:06 PM. I have sent my application. Nothing else to say. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#47. Posted on January 17, 2007 08:30 PM. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#48. Posted on January 17, 2007 08:27 PM. Erp... Could work. I'll try it. Until then, NO VOTE. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#49. Posted on January 17, 2007 08:24 PM. Good. Please edit for grammar. It's troublesome to have to read broken English all the time. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#50. Posted on January 17, 2007 08:20 PM. Doonbringer66 has a very good point. I myself more hope, rather than believe, but I take comfort that the unofficial expansion will come out anyway. 2008 is too far away anyway. I can't wait that long. Let Blizzard do World of WarCraft. I've never liked it, the prices are horrible with the nearest competitor playing Runescape (Yes, I used to play that game), and I truthfully don't see StarCraft coming out. But my fingers are crossed anyways. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#51. Posted on January 17, 2007 08:13 PM. I'm in the Sons of War expansion. Perhaps we should just scrap the project and wait like everybody else... Please don't flame me. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#52. Posted on January 07, 2007 09:28 PM. Hmm...you both have very good points. Theorycraft it is. However, if either of you had taken the time to read this strategy enough to see that it works in conjunctions with the macromanagement described in my other two strategies, you two could have been saying different comments. I will admit, I see that the Protoss strategy is not very well done. I deserved the votes I got. Thanks for reviewing. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#53. Posted on January 06, 2007 10:27 AM. Starcrafterkid has a point, but I think that this is one of the only strategies worth being put on StarCraft.org. If there was a "Very Good" or "Slightly Exceptional" vote, that's what I would give it. I'll be nice: EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#54. Posted on January 06, 2007 10:14 AM. Raynor on this one. I was going to say Tassadar...but I play Terran, and know almost nothing about Protoss. The last poll option was obviously a spoof, and made me think about what the staff was thinking. Comedy? It was funny, anyhow. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#55. Posted on January 05, 2007 05:49 PM. Very nicely done, if this is your work, of course. NO VOTE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#56. Posted on January 05, 2007 05:44 PM. This was incredibly well written, it actually had some length, and it rhymed. (Sorry for all you haiku artists out there; I'm Korean and have tried. Just not into it.) I loved the real-life relations. I must say that this poem deserved an EXCEPTIONAL. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#57. Posted on January 05, 2007 05:37 PM. Everyone else already chewed you out and told you why, so I can say things very simply: This strategy was horrible. Below Average -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#58. Posted on January 05, 2007 05:28 PM. What the heck? I did not get this. Still...it was pretty good. AVERAGE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#59. Posted on December 20, 2006 06:23 PM. I loved it. The only problem was, the end was a little too...corny. Keep writing; the amount of good authors on Starcraft.org is in short supply. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#60. Posted on December 19, 2006 08:50 PM. You said it, DocOc. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#61. Posted on December 18, 2006 08:43 PM. Kind of revealing...don't you think? (Just kidding) -Greglo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#62. Posted on December 18, 2006 03:32 PM. Wow. Yeah. I saw it. I actually think it was kind of funny. I received an PM for K'tan saying "Poor Work", and I was like, what the heck? I laughed my head of when I saw it though. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#63. Posted on December 09, 2006 08:36 PM. Well...I like it...It's cool... -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#64. Posted on December 03, 2006 04:48 PM. What the heck? -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#65. Posted on December 02, 2006 07:46 PM. How the heck would anybody want to live on Char?! It's full of underground zerg, ashed-over potholes, and thin crust with hot lava underneath? Not to mention the amount of ash on that world would probably smother you in your sleep. (No offense, 2hededlizrd ). No I vote Tarsonis, for some odd reason. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#66. Posted on November 30, 2006 08:43 PM. Loved it. -EXCEPTIONAL- -Gregleo2 P.S. I was kidding, for all those people that can't laugh out there/ ... Click here to view this comment.

#67. Posted on November 30, 2006 08:26 PM. I'm in the voice casting. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#68. Posted on November 29, 2006 08:32 PM. Agreeing with what thedutchjelle, I will also say that the strategy was fair. You've got to try harder to make an exceptional strategy. I know I haven't ever done that, and my latter strategies I've even tried on Battle.net. NO VOTE Keep working and trying, -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#69. Posted on November 29, 2006 08:02 PM. Fair. Tried it. Died. Tried it again. Won. GOOD -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#70. Posted on November 29, 2006 07:50 PM. Apologies, my superior friend and writer. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#71. Posted on November 29, 2006 03:47 PM. Wierd. I have uncles named Andy, David, and Robert. And my Dad is named Mark. You must have ESP. As for the story, EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#72. Posted on November 29, 2006 03:44 PM. The story was very much rushed. You didn't let the reader contact with the character. Also, the ending was confusing. Did he die, or did the leader die? Or both? Nice try with the poetry. Better than most on here, so I'll give you- AVERAGE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#73. Posted on November 29, 2006 02:52 PM. Tarsonis hands down. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#74. Posted on November 28, 2006 09:17 PM. pewi- you click ona username, such as mine, and then simply (when their profile pops up) click, "Send a message to___". To check your messages, just go to the Pirvate Message page in your NavBar. Please try to stay on topic. -gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#75. Posted on November 28, 2006 04:41 PM. Whoa! Wasn't expecting that! Thanks a lot for all your support, -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#76. Posted on November 28, 2006 04:38 PM. I believe a few are making characters, so not EVERYBODY'S given up. Granted, it won't be nearly as popular as the other two StarCraft games, expecially since this one isn't made by BLizzard with top-notch professionals, but I believe this project still carries real potentional. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#77. Posted on November 28, 2006 02:53 PM. I know I'm working on the official website, along with working with Torrasque and infested_zeratul to voice cast for three different parts. I'm trying to do my share, although it isn't much. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#78. Posted on November 27, 2006 06:15 PM. Very nice. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#79. Posted on November 27, 2006 05:59 PM. Death spells would be a disaster- plue it would refresh my distast and animosity towards WarCraft. Adad64's right. Blizzard has no power over this AT ALL. SInce they have created the Campaign Editor, they have granted the user to map creation. I think we also neglect the fact that Starcraft.org is the authyorized maps database wbsite for Blizzard. That gives us quite a bit more freedom. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#80. Posted on November 26, 2006 07:31 PM. Very nicely done. I've never thought about the Dark Archon's maelstrom ability put to suc hheavy use, because it would take quite a bit of work, resources, and time, but overall I would have to say EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#81. Posted on November 26, 2006 07:20 PM. I agree with Shoyo on this one. AVERAGE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#82. Posted on November 26, 2006 07:03 PM. Oh, X9, don't be insulted by protogod. I've been slammed so many times for the littlest things- today one man swore at me out of the blue today because I had created my website on a free website server. Besides, he's going through some tough time here over the StarCraft community. It'll pass. All things do. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#83. Posted on November 26, 2006 04:50 PM. With the exception of a few grammatical errors, you did incredibly well for a first-time writer. I actually got lost into the story, something very hard to do. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#84. Posted on November 26, 2006 04:41 PM. What the heck was this all about? Like K'tan said, try Warboards. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#85. Posted on November 26, 2006 04:40 PM. It seems to me that you have forgotten that the other player attacks too. With one barracks, against a zealot rush you would be SOOO dead. I mean, you don't even say "put a supply depot" after you build a few SCV's. You'd be so owned at whatever would happen, because your defense is so horrible, and you'd never HAVE time to "go nuclear". I don't mean for this to be rude but, I must say, honesty is the best policy. PRETTY BAD- You've gotta try harder. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#86. Posted on November 26, 2006 02:50 PM. Whoa...you manipulated my emotions for a while there. Very, very good- as far as I can tell, this is going to be one long series with a fantastic plotline. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#87. Posted on November 26, 2006 02:44 PM. I've already gotten the ghost. I can't vote, because theres not enough here. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#88. Posted on November 25, 2006 05:43 PM. I...died...*sob* And protogod, enjyo the story. It's been tough, especially for you, with Haladras leaving and the somewhat poor organization and all, but sometimes a little dose of cheer can be the solution. By the way, X9, I loved it. Also loved the ranting by my friend Adad64. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#89. Posted on November 25, 2006 12:42 PM. Hmmm... What to say... Well, I actually read this one. That's a start. I enjoyed how you were able to manipulate my emotions, but the imagination you "created" for me was rather confined. Didn't really like this story. You also need paragraphs. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#90. Posted on November 25, 2006 08:09 AM. Gallantry609- if you need website help, PM me. My website is http://www.gregleo.tk/ and my email is georgeandleo19@hotmail.com. Thanks. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#91. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:40 PM. Although one doesn't really need a strategy for Mission 3... A lot of n00bs feel as though they need one, and this strategy wuld work. Congrats- Good -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#92. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:24 PM. Wow...that was profoundly wise... -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#93. Posted on November 24, 2006 03:22 PM. What "dang website"? -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#94. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:49 AM. GamewizX, get your mind out of the gutter! (just kidding- I was thinking the same thing). Fair- No vote -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#95. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:40 AM. Thank you, X9. Most of these are written in about half an hour during my math classes. I just need to spend more time on them, which is why I haven't posted anything on here for a while. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#96. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:38 AM. Yeah...I tried to make the ending as unconfusing as possible, and I wanted to put this story on here. Thanks, X9. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#97. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:37 AM. Thank you for your comment. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#98. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:36 AM. Thanks for all the feedback everybody. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#99. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:33 AM. Very nice. Even though any experinced player on Battle.net may be able to outdo this, I happen to enjoy this strategy. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#100. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:31 AM. The few...the proud...marines. Damn me, Avenged7Fold? Too late. jk -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#101. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:28 AM. Bien. Me gusta Senior of The Swarm: Si Vis Pacem, Para Bellum. Es cierto! -Gregleo2 P.S. Let's hope my Spanish III grammar said that right... ... Click here to view this comment.

#102. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:26 AM. I haven't seen something like this in a while, although (yes ShadowStryker, and X9 you were right), SCV stands for Space Construction Vehicle. I vote GOOD. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#103. Posted on November 24, 2006 08:07 AM. I have no idea who to send this to, so I'll post it here. I'm willing to make a web site for the new StarCraft Expansion that we are attempting to make. I know advanced HTML and basic Javascript. I am alsowilling to work with another person. If my talents are questioned, please look at http://www.gregleo.tk/. I also have fifteen different web sites in my portfolio that one may view. I think it could be cool to make a web site, so...I hopt this helps. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#104. Posted on November 21, 2006 04:25 PM. You know, protogod, I agree. I apologize Primeshooter, but I couldn't understand a blamed word you just said. I better start PMing mutalisk332 and DocterTerabyte for the design and Fanfic. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#105. Posted on November 20, 2006 04:10 PM. I apologize for the flaming. It wasn't the right place. -Gregleo2 georgeandleo19@hotmail.com ... Click here to view this comment.

#106. Posted on November 19, 2006 07:04 PM. Thank you, guys, but I think it is useless. How can we even compare with Adad64 around? He seems to know EVERYTHING about creation and web design, and seems to have decided to take my field of proffesion. What do I know that he doesn't? Business. I'm creating web sites for actual people, on real web servers, with real dotcom addresses. Not for family members, on Freewebs, with pitiful games. But, what do I know? Oh, yes, ask Adad64. He'll know the answer. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#107. Posted on November 18, 2006 04:23 PM. What are you talking about, adad64?! If you're looking for an awsome website creator, look at ME. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#108. Posted on November 11, 2006 01:20 PM. Count me in. HTML and Fanfic are my specialties. I'll get the PM to mutilisk332 and DocterTerabyte and see what I can do. Sounds good? Good. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#109. Posted on October 23, 2006 07:15 PM. What is this of? -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#110. Posted on October 22, 2006 02:40 PM. Thanks for telling us information about three StarCraft units that we could've gotten from an official Blizzard book or that we already know. AVERAGE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#111. Posted on October 22, 2006 02:29 PM. Just use scourges. Takes a lot les time, and the wonderful thing is that they don't take a lot of resources and a two of them come out of one egg. AVERAGE- Good strategy, all in all. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#112. Posted on October 22, 2006 02:25 PM. If you killed the rest of their base, wouldn't the Command Ceneter be the noly thing left? NO VOTE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#113. Posted on October 22, 2006 02:21 PM. GOODNESS this would take a forever amount of minerals and vespene gas. It would take a lot of time, too. Now, from my experience, if you did this, you wouldn't be able to rush, and your defense would be so little that, as such, you wouldn't be able to work out any real defense against the opposing player if they rush. You would die against any experienced player using this strategy. Remember that the opposing player attacks, too, you know. I'm not even sure that this would work against a compuit ... Click here to view this comment.

#114. Posted on October 22, 2006 02:11 PM. Wow. I wish I had dreams like that... Now for the story... This being, an assumed Protoss named "Xaral", needs to play a bigger part. Explain the warp gate, the one thing that is titled in your submission. Otherwise, it should be something titled like "Victoria's Secret" (funny.). I also want to know more of the background between Victoria and this Protoss. However, I did notice that you used correct punctuation and grammar. I don't know about anybody else on the site, but ... Click here to view this comment.

#115. Posted on October 21, 2006 01:11 PM. 45 words per minute for me. About the piece... Okay, I've already made it clear that I dislike cussing and swearing. On this site, I'm not going to get away from it, but it can be replaced in submissions with other words. I know you enough that you know other words for that. Now, I didn't really care for the repetition. It was annyoing after a time to hear the drill seargent yelling out, "Stupid noob." all the time. It created somewhat of a scene for me. It goes something like this: ... Click here to view this comment.

#116. Posted on October 19, 2006 06:04 PM. Called him. Made up. Everything's cool. Thanks for your advice, X9. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#117. Posted on October 18, 2006 02:32 PM. Enjoyed it. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#118. Posted on October 18, 2006 09:32 AM. Adad64 saying that my stories suck...backstabber. I've seen his stroies that he's written. He shouldn't be talking for fear of being run out of our neighborhood. His stories suck incredibly bad. No plot, spelling errors, why the list goes on and on. Okay....stop flaming.... About the story, one word: EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#119. Posted on October 18, 2006 09:25 AM. Pretty fair story, although heavy handed on imagination (which isn't bad) and swearing (which is terrible). The plot could be imporved a bit. Try to flow the paragraphs a little more. The prolouge was excellent. I like the idea of Protoss prisoners. Very nicely done. GOOD -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#120. Posted on October 18, 2006 08:17 AM. Grim! It's been a while since I've seen you on the site! I must be blind... The strategy... It was...um...okay. But let's be honest with ourselves. Is it REALLY possible to win a game with hydralisks and lurkers? I plasy Terran, and I beat off waves of rushes like that every time I go on Battle.net. Might work against a computer opponent, but not against an advanced human player. BELOW AVERAGE- Keep it up. Work on it, and become better. You have something here. All the best, -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#121. Posted on October 18, 2006 08:11 AM. Did you vote for yourself? I was going to vote good, but... The strategy was all right. It seems to me that you'll need more than that to work. Like resources. The organization chart also threw me off. Keep working on it, and try to do paragraph form (like my strategies). AVERAGE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#122. Posted on October 18, 2006 08:07 AM. Good organization. This strategy might work. Kind of confusing though. Try spelling things out a little more next time. GOOD -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#123. Posted on October 17, 2006 04:39 PM. Hmmm...what to say, what to say... Much of this is very good, but I'm confused about one thing. From my experience on LAN and Battle.net, Terran vs. Terran can be some of the most exiting games ever. Why? Well, to start off, you have the same things. That's a given. But you also have to know what you are doing. If you look carefully, many of the Terran researches really don't work against another Terran player. You need skill and raw bulk. Strategy and micromaneging are a must. If you use sei ... Click here to view this comment.

#124. Posted on October 17, 2006 02:07 PM. I read your narrative and stopped reading. Don't say you suck at writing; it'll only make things worse. The noly way you'll get better is doing stuff like this. Let people critique on your stories, adn you'll WILL get good. I promise. NO VOTE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#125. Posted on October 17, 2006 02:04 PM. I liked this. The way you weer able to describe things, like the woman and the shot being fired. It almost put the whole thing in slow motion. A bit short, but that's no excuse for not voting a good vote. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#126. Posted on October 17, 2006 09:27 AM. This is the most funny thing I have ever seen on Fanart, with the exception of your other submission. I laughed so hard at this, I almost cried. NO VOTE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#127. Posted on October 17, 2006 09:18 AM. You're kidding, right? This is sonme kind of joke, right? I can't even vote. Maybe it is a "Where's Waldo?" sort of thing...for real. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#128. Posted on October 17, 2006 09:04 AM. I would pay big money to see this strategy used in tournaments. Or even Battle.net. It...um, how do I say this kindly...sucked. Yuo need to scout to do this, and lurkers are a mid-game unit. Against a Zerg player who rushes, this would do nothing. PRETTY BAD (I would choose "Very Bad" if it was up there.) Work on it, -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#129. Posted on October 17, 2006 08:32 AM. I have Liberty's Crusade... The story... Very well written. Not the mechanics, spacing, or spelling, which was all average, but the plot and emotion. Superb. It's not all the time I have my emotions manipulated to make me feel what the writer wants me to feel. I felt sorry for the marine. I wanted the person he was writing to back home to get his message and feel the pain that the marine must endure. The way you wrote about zergling rushes and lurkers...absolutely exceptional. I'm going to ha ... Click here to view this comment.

#130. Posted on October 16, 2006 05:03 PM. I liked the story. Well well written, although the plot was kind of fractured and incomplete. Sice I understand that this is the first chapter, everything must be explained. GOOD -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#131. Posted on October 15, 2006 03:48 PM. Very nicely done. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#132. Posted on October 12, 2006 04:48 PM. Who needs fun ways to destroy n00bs?! You can kill them and experiement with their heads almost as much as you want to. That's fun for me. AVERAGE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#133. Posted on October 12, 2006 04:46 PM. I could probably get a few marines in there to wreak havok with your strategy if I played you and you used this. FAIR- No vote. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#134. Posted on October 12, 2006 04:44 PM. GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR. "Excellent Rush for Terran"?! Must not flame... PRETTY BAD- Try harder next time. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#135. Posted on October 12, 2006 04:37 PM. No comment. GOOD -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#136. Posted on October 12, 2006 04:30 PM. Unlikely as it seems, Geckat, you actually can design Flash and not know any HTML at all. With Macromedia now, you can do pretty much anything. HTML is rapidly becoming more diffficult for the user because all these new programs make other programs easier. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#137. Posted on October 12, 2006 04:23 PM. The plot was okay. you said that you did it for school, so I'll be a little easier on you. Check your mechanics and work on the dialouge, and you'll get better. AVERAGE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#138. Posted on October 11, 2006 03:14 PM. It's hard making things out of legos, especially things like that. however, with more time and practice you could get the proportions correct. AVERAGE (But I can't do any better) -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#139. Posted on October 11, 2006 03:10 PM. X9- Resopnding to your question, I do get bored in Algebra II, so I do pre-calculus to amke up for it (but I still have time to write stories.) It's okay, I guess... -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#140. Posted on October 10, 2006 07:23 PM. BELOW AVERAGE But, to tell you the truth, I probably couldn't do any better. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#141. Posted on October 10, 2006 07:21 PM. Gee whiz; look aat all these people. Getting their usernames embroidered by Gallantry609. I wish somebody would do this for me... Guess I'm not popular enough. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#142. Posted on October 10, 2006 07:15 PM. You haven't met me? I'm surprised. Actually, I beleive you've commented on some of my submissions. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#143. Posted on October 10, 2006 06:06 PM. First. To begin, I've got to say that I love Call of Duty 2. Games like that are fun. Now for the story... Since I haven't read the others in the series, then it seemed incomplete. but that's my fault for jumping in the middle of a series. However, there was some things you could correct... Way too dang long. I got halfway, and just got tired. Thus, I quit, and couldn't comment on the plot. Long and confusing. Try to make it shorter by simplifying it, or separating your submission into t ... Click here to view this comment.

#144. Posted on October 10, 2006 05:54 PM. I like it. Since there is no perception of space, your drawing can simply be interpreted as any size. (Which is good.) If there was a "very good", I'd vote for it. GOOD -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#145. Posted on October 10, 2006 05:51 PM. Listen to DarkLStrike. When I draw things, I always ink them in pen, so they don't LOOK like sketches. You also need more background, and color would flush the picture quite nicely. I apologize, but BELOW AVERAGE. Keep it up, though, -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#146. Posted on October 10, 2006 05:48 PM. Of course, X9. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#147. Posted on October 09, 2006 06:49 PM. Cool. For the Terran!(Dangit, ShadowStryker was right- it sounds wrong.) -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#148. Posted on October 09, 2006 06:47 PM. Man, I've been commenting on a lot of fan art lately...maybe just because it's easier to analyze than to read a million-page story. Now for the art, two words: Loved it. EXCEPTIONAL -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#149. Posted on October 09, 2006 06:45 PM. I want to be in your next one! ... Click here to view this comment.

#150. Posted on October 09, 2006 06:42 PM. 123456789?! "That's like what some idiot would put on his luggage!" (from Spaceballs) Actually....that's what I have on my luggage. Just kidding. I liked it. GOOD -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#151. Posted on October 09, 2006 06:39 PM. Was that last scentence supposed to be racism? (jk- I ought to be flattered) I'm Korean, although I live in the U.S. and yes, I speak English quite fluently. GOOD -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#152. Posted on October 09, 2006 06:32 PM. Very nice. I like the new spin on things- not just a kid being put into a literal world like StarCraft, but that he started out playing on Battle.net. GOOD -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#153. Posted on October 09, 2006 04:58 PM. Tip before I read this... If it's less than one page long, I usually don't read it, because that usually signifies that it...um...sucks. Okay, let's read... Like the fact that you were straightforward in your strategy, but disliked the fact that you did exactly that. You need to get into detail, or else you'll get clobbered by angry SC.org users (Read my strategies). ... Click here to view this comment.

#154. Posted on October 09, 2006 04:54 PM. Very nice. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#155. Posted on October 09, 2006 04:33 PM. erg....how do I put this nicely... Not bad. It was weell drawn, and had a certain appeal. Yet, not good either. Do you know what Zerglings and Archons are? Looks like a giant dog with claws fighting off either a character from "Alien" surrounded in "blue fire" or a Pokemon to me. Kudos for trying. AVERAGE -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#156. Posted on October 09, 2006 04:28 PM. Um...okay. Let's see. I'll copy and paste the parts that REALLY threw me off: John-'Holy Shit...Does anyone smell that?' Ryker-'Hey Lieutenant, where the hell are we?'.. John-'OH MY GOD!' Dan-'SHUT THE HELL UP!' John-'Sorry its just, I don't like breathing in air that smells like shit!' Dan-'Well,how do you know what shit smells like?' John-'Becuase i'm around you all the time'..... Further down the tunnel, Chris-'Anyone hear that?'..... Jones-'AH!' Dan-'WHAT,WHERE,WHO?' Jones-'S ... Click here to view this comment.

#157. Posted on October 09, 2006 04:23 PM. Cool. I liked it. ... Click here to view this comment.

#158. Posted on October 07, 2006 03:30 PM. Liked the hydralisk, not so with the marine. A little too...juvenile for me. However, I'm no fanfic artist, so I'll vote average. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#159. Posted on October 06, 2006 04:40 PM. 13OXer- I'm Korean too. And yes, I thought the first scentence was a little bit dumb. ... Click here to view this comment.

#160. Posted on October 06, 2006 04:36 PM. ergggg... No comment. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#161. Posted on October 06, 2006 04:22 PM. Hmm... Since I don't want to be made the enemy here, I'll give you what I gathered. 1. Good job. When I submitted by first strategy (A Mix of Different Terrans), I was hounded for all I was worth. Wqorse than that, users started cussing at each other and the whole thing turned into a chat section. I got an "average" on that strategy. 2. Focusing more on the negative side, I would like to know why you would use a drop for this, especially sincee you would have such a great ground for ... Click here to view this comment.

#162. Posted on October 05, 2006 09:19 PM. Hi. Adad64 finally got me to read this story, and so I finally read it. Here's my input. 1. I was confused when you made Theo drop from fifteen thousand stories. I thought they would give him his ghost stuff then. 2. As Dragon said, much of the text is lifeless and tedious. He pretty much summed up everything else I wanted to add. I would give your work on this a good. HOWEVER, I rather liked the storyline, because it is always good to see something rather new after everybody (including me) ... Click here to view this comment.

#163. Posted on October 05, 2006 05:04 PM. Erg. Do you really think the Zerg won't have a Evolution chamber in the middle of the game? Other than that, quite good. -EXCEPTIONAL- -Gregleo2, terran ... Click here to view this comment.

#164. Posted on October 05, 2006 04:55 PM. Same here, dashrender. I desing websites professionally, and my affiliate (known as Adad64 on here) does the Flash and animation. However, I know squat about Diablo. -Gregleo2 (gregleo.tk) ... Click here to view this comment.

#165. Posted on October 03, 2006 08:04 PM. I read the first scentence and laughed my head off...I'll keep reading. Good first impression. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#166. Posted on October 03, 2006 07:57 PM. I haven't read the other posts, so i might just be repeating rehash, but this is where I got: 1. The mechanics. You had run-on scentences and really short scentences. You also spelled Alexi Stukov's name wrong...(I think.) 2. The storyline. I didn't get much out of the story. What on Earth is the big picture here? 3. The cussing. Yes, marines are resocialized convicts, but does that really mean we have to put all seven swear words into the story. I don't swear, and I get along fine. You have ... Click here to view this comment.

#167. Posted on October 03, 2006 07:44 PM. Same problem. ... Click here to view this comment.

#168. Posted on October 03, 2006 07:31 PM. I would love fighting K'tan on Battle.net. My friend Adad64 may be a n00b, but I sure as heck aint. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#169. Posted on October 03, 2006 04:14 PM. Thanks, K'tan. My story is off the popular list now, so things should settle down. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#170. Posted on October 02, 2006 05:46 PM. No offense, Adad, but lets just keep our comments on other peoples stories off the website until you get your own submission in. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#171. Posted on October 01, 2006 05:59 PM. Fair. I don't like the picture, since it's so simple, but the fact that it looks so incredibly real and that you did it paint- kudos. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#172. Posted on October 01, 2006 05:47 PM. I'm dissapointed in you, Adad64. I never want to see you posting like this on one of my stories again. You know you did something wrong when a staff member comes and gets gets you into trouble. As for OneLoneMarine37, thanks for apologizing. That shows more maturity than a lot of people on this web site. And DarkLStrike- honest, as usual. You might be the number one person who can find more things wrong with my stories. And that's not a bad thing. Talk to y'all later, Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#173. Posted on September 29, 2006 03:00 PM. Wow. I had no idea that this would be so popular. I wrote it when I had some spare time in my Algebra 2 math class. Thanks, all. -Gregleo2 OneLoneMarine- you have a point. I sure didn't make 15 different accounts, but my freind adad64 might have. I'm looking at everybody's user profiles and everybody with the exception of X9, adad64, you and myself has only spoken once- and that's on my story. That's crazy. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#174. Posted on September 25, 2006 05:30 PM. Let's go people. Want some feedback. ... Click here to view this comment.

#175. Posted on September 20, 2006 03:50 PM. I'm undecided. How can you fund your strategy? Cheat codes? Unless I missed something (which I probably did). -No rating- Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#176. Posted on September 20, 2006 03:40 PM. Oh. My. Freakin'. Heck. You made this? That's crazy. Exceptional. ... Click here to view this comment.

#177. Posted on September 20, 2006 03:21 PM. Good. I would say that this is more of commmon sense than a startegy, but that you added a unique view and actually took the time to write it down really actually says something. I've written a few strategies for Terran, and so I'm quite a Terran critic, but this was pretty good. I like it. -Gregleo2 ... Click here to view this comment.

#178. Posted on April 23, 2006 05:23 PM. lol, DarkLStrike. But you DO have a point. ... Click here to view this comment.

#179. Posted on April 23, 2006 03:19 PM. Hmm...It's okay, though heavy-handed and dependent on the Science Vessels. Average. ... Click here to view this comment.

#180. Posted on April 23, 2006 03:16 PM. I play Terran, but I can say this: When I was a Zerg player, I did A LOT of Zegling / mutalisk rushes, and this strategy can be shot down with something not so different than that. Zerg plays in brute force, with cheap units, and this strategy will work exactly to the Zerg player's advantage. Zerglings and mutalisks will take pretty much anything down, and infested terrans (if you are fortunatate enough to get them) can wips out defenses in no time at all. all you need is a lot of weak units to ... Click here to view this comment.

#181. Posted on April 23, 2006 03:07 PM. Fair. Seems okay, since it's for money maps, but I just don't know... Why don't you play Brood War? It's a ton better than the regular Starcraft, and about 7/8 of the users here can vouch for me on that. Also, a science vessel can wipe out all of an archons shields, and then they only have 10hp. As I said before, fair. ... Click here to view this comment.

#182. Posted on April 18, 2006 03:04 PM. Okay, three things: 1. I hated this strategy. everyone else probably already explained why. 2. There are tons of comments here, and all because poeple got offended by pople. (obvious) 3. Suprised at all the swearing. Sure, I hear it at school sometimes, but using it to make your point just doesn't seem right, does it? I know you all know alternatives for the A-Word, the D-Word, the H-Word, and the grandaddy F-word. Well, that's it, I'm done. And I'm staying neutral to the conversations. ... Click here to view this comment.

#183. Posted on April 17, 2006 05:36 PM. If there was a ver bad option, that's what I would choose. I'll write a real safe strat vs. Zerg. ... Click here to view this comment.

#184. Posted on April 17, 2006 02:38 PM. Good poetry from me, but really, I'm just looking into it. Usually I can't sit still long enough to read the first scentence. ---good--- ... Click here to view this comment.

#185. Posted on April 17, 2006 02:30 PM. Duh. I like it. It's cool, I guess, but it was obvious. Average. ... Click here to view this comment.

#186. Posted on April 17, 2006 02:24 PM. lol. I love your stories, by the way, DocOc. They trump mine. ... Click here to view this comment.

#187. Posted on April 17, 2006 06:35 AM. Exactly, DarkLstrike. you jusdt hit the anil on the head. The Cammand Center twells the ghosts where tp launch and the ghosts pinpoint the launch and then launch it. ... Click here to view this comment.

#188. Posted on April 16, 2006 08:52 PM. Hey, DocOc, I loved your story. I mean it. Even though you swore at me and hated mine, I still give you applause for yours. It's cool. ... Click here to view this comment.

#189. Posted on April 15, 2006 09:22 PM. Um, how are you even supposed to get to the "workers"? Even if they have to go far away, your opponent, unless they are a n00b, will still have it protected. Pretty bad. ... Click here to view this comment.

#190. Posted on April 15, 2006 09:17 PM. Oh, please, DocOc. I don't see any set thing that says that they use their physchic powers to set off nukes. Please. I can't apologize for that. It' all up in the writer's imagination, not yours. Use the writer's imagination to embellish yours. I hear your still in the seventh grade, so O wouldn't be taling about hobos becoming ghosts. Words travel fast aroung StarCraft.org. ... Click here to view this comment.

#191. Posted on April 15, 2006 09:13 PM. lol. No. He's all heart, really. He doesn't do much for strategies, as he's only in the stories. ... Click here to view this comment.

#192. Posted on April 15, 2006 05:51 PM. 2 hrs less than U.S. East. Sorry. ... Click here to view this comment.

#193. Posted on April 15, 2006 09:49 AM. Yes. It'll be okay. I know my time zones and how to convert them to my time zone. I traveled out East. What race will you be? (terran, Zerg, Protoss) I'll be....terran (surprise) I'll see you there. ... Click here to view this comment.

#194. Posted on April 15, 2006 09:23 AM. Would it be okay to play on the Gateway West? ... Click here to view this comment.

#195. Posted on April 15, 2006 08:33 AM. Gregleo Actually it's Gregleo2. What's yours? ... Click here to view this comment.

#196. Posted on April 14, 2006 07:29 PM. Thanks, DarkLStrike. how would you suggest to help me revise it so it'll be better? ... Click here to view this comment.

#197. Posted on April 14, 2006 07:27 PM. Thank you, antradox (but, I was laughing when I said that because your comment was nothing BUT constructive criticism!) I'll play you tommorrow (Saturday) DarkLStrike. I really don't have much time right now. Don't worry- you'll have your oppertunity to crush me. ... Click here to view this comment.

#198. Posted on April 14, 2006 04:45 PM. Woah! Calm down, TSOShadow! I agree with your views, and I wish people would give more CONSTRUCTIVE criticism (ask anybody, I'm big on that). But, you know, they're right. No vote. ... Click here to view this comment.

#199. Posted on April 14, 2006 04:37 PM. probably not. But you said 1 v 1. that wouldn't be too bad. Neither would a 2 on 2. ... Click here to view this comment.

#200. Posted on April 14, 2006 04:21 PM. Ok. I have a 50.6kbps modem, So it'll take a while. But i'll let you know as soon as I get it. ... Click here to view this comment.

#201. Posted on April 14, 2006 02:22 PM. Thanks, DarkLSrtike. I've got a new strategy in the making, and it has EVERYTHING. ... Click here to view this comment.

#202. Posted on April 13, 2006 08:33 PM. It'skay. submit nother one for Terrans. Average. ... Click here to view this comment.

#203. Posted on April 13, 2006 08:28 PM. Cool. I have a few things to say: DarkLStrike: I'm sorry. I don't have a battle.net account. I submitted my strategies for games like Local(Lan) Network IPX. How do you get one? (So I can submit more strategies ) You're also right abou the ghosts. TheSniper: Thank you. I like your constructive criticism. If I make another strategy with all these add-ons and fixes, I could get a great strategy! For everybody: In South Korea, so mnay poeple play StarCraft that it is now recogized as an &qu ... Click here to view this comment.

#204. Posted on April 13, 2006 08:22 PM. sweet. Adam and I- we're in our very early teens for all those online predators. ... Click here to view this comment.

#205. Posted on April 13, 2006 03:35 PM. I liked how incorperated real life in StarCraft. AS for the strategies where you (the player) supposedly loses, i found a way out on all of them. For instance- archons attacking a base? A couple science vessels could EMP Shockwave them, and then bunkers could take them out, for archons only have 10hp without their shields. But the strategy was very well-done. I vote good. ... Click here to view this comment.

#206. Posted on April 13, 2006 03:13 PM. lol, adam. thanks for your support ... Click here to view this comment.

#207. Posted on April 13, 2006 03:07 PM. Okay, first: DarkLStrike: You've made your point. We know. i don't have a screen name. how do I get one? Grim Terror: I like your criticism. What I WOULD like to see from you though is more constructive feedback. You seem to be a very smart starcRaft player. craftstar: Thanks for commenting I have a cool dad. Adad64: Down, boy! Down! (just kidding, Adam) And the ghost issue: they have many special abilities that marines don't have. They have cloak, lockdown, and even a nuclear strike advan ... Click here to view this comment.

#208. Posted on April 13, 2006 03:00 PM. Uh, uh, uh. We're not even close to tell you our ages. You could be an internet predator. BUT, I like you, DarkLStrike. you have a good personality. See you later. P.S. It says in Starcraft Mission 8 that kerrigan is a cerebrate, but I still could be wrong. ... Click here to view this comment.

#209. Posted on April 13, 2006 06:34 AM. THANK YOU, NastyApe. I totally forgot about the science vessle. I could have dies if I was against a ghost, wraith, dark templar, or lurker. As for adad64, he's my friend. I know him in person, so don't worry. ... Click here to view this comment.

#210. Posted on April 12, 2006 06:59 PM. THank you, TSO shadow. you actually gave constructive criticism. thank you. ... Click here to view this comment.

#211. Posted on April 12, 2006 06:54 PM. Bravo, maficus. You understandthe traditional ways of killing opponents. you know, now with all the people making up new strategies, it's nice to see the old ways. I did not vote for myself, one of you probably did and is just pinning it on me. 1 v 1? I'd love to. ... Click here to view this comment.

#212. Posted on April 12, 2006 06:50 PM. Oh, no. did I? Really. I'm sorry that it doesn't live up to your exppectations. Adam was appointed by the overmind as a cerebrate. It doesn't have to be an egg-like structure. Yes, the nuclear missles always save the day, don't they? My favorite is escaping Adam's clutches, too. it makes my main chracter look cool. I like the way you think and I like you honesty, DarkLStrike. THanks for being there when I needed feedback. I'm sorry there were typos in my story. ... Click here to view this comment.

#213. Posted on April 12, 2006 06:36 PM. I'm sorry. I was meaning a cerebrate such as Kerrigan. I'm sorry I didn't make it clear. As for the fight scenes- i don't want to make it gory. I'm sorry, but I'll keep it at PG instead of upgrading it to R. Think about it. ... Click here to view this comment.

#214. Posted on April 12, 2006 06:31 PM. Yup, he plays Sc. Um..about the island thing that's dragging me down- you build in mass. Mass. Mass. It works. A bunch of battlecruisers with Yamato Cannon and wraiths with cloak just has an effect on your enemies. I'm sorry I didn't explain it in the strategy. ... Click here to view this comment.

#215. Posted on April 12, 2006 06:27 PM. I'm not gonna vote. I think the drwing is okay, but the pants hanging down to show the underwear and the small battlecruiser really lost me. Sorry. ... Click here to view this comment.

#216. Posted on April 12, 2006 06:22 PM. Awful. Just plain awful. I play Terran, and by the time you got ten zealots made, I would have about 15 marines and 5 medics. i would just destroy you. As for the photon cannons at the end of the game(if you get there with this strategy), I would have either nukes or battlecruisers to wipe them out. This is NOT an ideal strategy for Protoss, for protossis the hardest opponent I play against. Like TheSniper, this feedback may sound harsh, but honesty is the best policy. Hope you get better, ... Click here to view this comment.

#217. Posted on April 12, 2006 02:53 PM. I loved the strategy, but like the others said, you need paragraphs. ... Click here to view this comment.

#218. Posted on April 11, 2006 08:57 PM. BraVO! This is one of the only strategies I liked. I'm a hrard-core terran player, and this might actually beat me... ... Click here to view this comment.

#219. Posted on April 11, 2006 08:52 PM. What if a player simply came in with several dozen marines and medics? Plain and simple. No special effects, no extra cost. With marines and medics, you're in some seriuos trouble. However, I do like this strategy quite a bit- I used to play Zerg and they have real potential. ... Click here to view this comment.

#220. Posted on April 11, 2006 08:46 PM. Okay, I didn't like this strategy. Plain and simple. These things require RESOURCES. Recsources that are hard to get early on in the game. If you facing Zerg, this wouldn't work because Zerg attcks quick and fast. I know because I play Terran. ... Click here to view this comment.