mrBojangles
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The following are documents submitted by this user:
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| 1 | The Forgotten, 2006. Pt.1 | Fiction |
| 2 | The Forgotten, 2006. Pt.2 | Fiction |
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#1. Posted on June 24, 2007 08:03 PM. My spoon is too big. Also, I must play SC2 ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#2. Posted on September 09, 2006 12:28 PM. Just one new RTS level designer? That doesn't sound like the kind of hiring Blizzard would want to make for a major title like Starcraft 2. Maybe if it were more like 3 or 4 new designers I'd do more than raise my sorely bruised hopes the tiniest inch for a new SC title.I voted probably not because I've been hurt and abused too many times by Blizzard. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#3. Posted on August 24, 2006 04:24 PM. You know, for some reason this image sort of has...something that makes me enjoy it! Good. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#4. Posted on August 24, 2006 04:22 PM. Its blurry edges my eyes. That, and I don't like it. Average. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#5. Posted on August 24, 2006 04:19 PM. Meh, its a doodle. Nothing special. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#6. Posted on August 24, 2006 04:16 PM. Really good actually. Is that a starwars piece on the bottom left side where the arm connects to the body? I really like the choice of techno lego for the machine gun. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#7. Posted on August 24, 2006 04:11 PM. Nothing on this website makes sense, what the hell are protoss? Zerg? Where are all the boats manufactured by starcraft marine? www.starcraftmarine.com ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#8. Posted on August 24, 2006 02:25 PM. Yeah, I hate the term 'crystals' when talking about those minerals, so I made up the term Carbon Minerals. It sounds more scientific instead of just saying crystals. Like you know in old old movies when there's a scientist they just say "I'm doing science!" and never what exactly it is they're doing. Well, thats what I think it sounds like when people just say 'crystals!" ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#9. Posted on August 23, 2006 08:40 PM. Really good stuff man! How did you texture the ground? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#10. Posted on August 23, 2006 08:38 PM. Good eye for the detail. But only place that lacks detail is of course, as previously mentioned, the blank areas. But perhaps you left them blank because it would clutter the image up? Ah well, excellent job overall ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#11. Posted on August 23, 2006 08:31 PM. I was reading along and picked out a few errors, or things that could be improved. ...its heavy chitin shell protecting it from the blats of the three... Obviously here its just a simple spelling error ...trying to slam the Zerg creature on the had with his gauss rifle.... Another simple spelling error, easy to fix. ...and even a string of fragmentation grenades to try to stun them didn’t work at all.... This sentance has a grammar problem. What should be said is something like " ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#12. Posted on August 23, 2006 08:02 PM. Good stuff still, as of now its not extremely tough to follow and I like that. But anyways, while I was reading I picked out a few errors. 1) All dialogue from different characters goes into it's own paragraph. Although that IS hard to do with the way the fan fic submissions work and it ends up looking like a major mess. 2) This one paragraph really really bothered me: Lincoln’s experienced eye looked up and down at the slaughter, and he glanced at Raynor. Raynor nodded. They’d come to ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#13. Posted on August 18, 2006 10:14 PM. Starcraft? What the hell is that? A boating company or something? www.starcraftmarine.com right? ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#14. Posted on August 17, 2006 04:15 PM. Ihatezerg brought up a good point about how realistic the combat was, but to your credit I enjoyed reading it. I know from experience how hard it is to write a combat scene and think how actual military would go about it. But anyways, I like this one, I'll continue reading later ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#15. Posted on August 12, 2006 09:59 AM. Lol, that was f'n hilarious, I remember making this comment myself back in the day "so he made up a rhyme so his mullet's would be cool and it went "short in the front so mom's no mad long in the back so it's still rad"" mullets are funny ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#16. Posted on August 05, 2006 02:28 PM. Lol, simple yet effective humor ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#17. Posted on August 05, 2006 02:26 PM. Hmm, I remember most of those names ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#18. Posted on August 05, 2006 02:24 PM. Really good, I love the attention paid to the background. Too many good pictures are ruined when a background is bad. Not that I'm one to talk. But anyways, the Dark Templar looks a little too zergish, but whatever, its your art, live it! ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#19. Posted on August 05, 2006 02:16 PM. Good stuff, but when you made this, did you lay your hand down on the bits you had already drawn? It looks really smudged. I didn't downgrade because of it, but I was just wonderin' ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#20. Posted on August 05, 2006 02:11 PM. Excellent use of shading. I really like how his (left?) leg is in the dark, thats quite unique and pulls off well ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#21. Posted on August 01, 2006 03:37 PM. The least you could have done is take out the copywrite information at the bottom ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#22. Posted on August 01, 2006 03:21 PM. It was funny, and I do agree with your making the cells black bit. THe only beef I have is that your text is unbelieveably hard to read. Blue background and black text do not go together, especially when its that small.I would have reccommended extending the strip past three frames, if you have the time and skill, you shoud re-do this one and animate the glorious zealot's battle to break up his long text bubble. That would really make the poor death the unfortunate zealot had even funnier ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#23. Posted on July 27, 2006 09:39 PM. Good stuff, I enjoyed it. But I think it could almost be a series. You know, like two more, Zergling Rant, Zealot Rant, along with Marine Rant. Of course, the other two would be harder to do, but it could be done. ... Click here to view this comment. |
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#24. Posted on July 27, 2006 02:31 PM. Marines, mostly for the fact that they attack both ground and air at a decent distance. Plus, if used with stimpacks they can be extremely devastating to just about anything. ... Click here to view this comment. |
