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The following are documents submitted by this user:

#	Document	Channel
1	Marine (TFW's Resurgence)	Fan Art
2	The Installation	Fan Art
3	YAAAAAARGH!!!	Fan Art
4	Marine O.O	Fan Art
5	Ghost (experimental)	Fan Art
6	Ghost (TFW)	Fan Art
7	Marine Test (TFW)	Fan Art
8	Low-Poly marine (TFW)	Fan Art
9	Low-Poly Marine 2 (TFW)	Fan Art
10	Somebody Call For An Exterminator..? (TFW)	Fan Art
11	Marines (TFW)	Fan Art
12	Low-Poly Marine 3 (TFW)	Fan Art
13	Low-Poly Marine GIF (TFW)	Fan Art
14	Low-Poly Marine GIF 2 (TFW)	Fan Art
15	Investigation	Fan Art
16	Investigation (TFW)	Fan Art
17	Charlie Knight, Hero Of The Dominion Chapters 1-3	Fiction
18	The Mudfoot's Tale	Fiction

The following are comments posted by this user:

#1. Posted on July 19, 2008 02:26 AM. lolz not everything, sir! Thanks! ... Click here to view this comment.

#2. Posted on July 15, 2008 04:51 AM. I'm very sorry but can you please delete this? The pic is screwed up and the internet right now is very slow. I'll submit a better version when it's over. ... Click here to view this comment.

#3. Posted on July 10, 2008 05:41 AM. OKAYZ! Got it and working on another one! Taking my time learning bones this time!!! ... Click here to view this comment.

#4. Posted on July 10, 2008 05:39 AM. Kewl! Nice detail for its cockpit(?) and fuselage(?). But the sphere-thingy on the wing pylon looks queer. No texture? DAMN! Good but borderline EXP! PS. I thought that ball-thing was the cockpit, then I saw those small windows. Forgive the n00b question, but do Protoss still need windows to see if they can use their uber-leet psychic powers? ... Click here to view this comment.

#5. Posted on July 10, 2008 05:29 AM. Lol more pics of zerglings/doggies!!! XD ... Click here to view this comment.

#6. Posted on July 10, 2008 05:23 AM. It looks more like something from Star Trek. For suggestions refer to comment #1. ... Click here to view this comment.

#7. Posted on July 10, 2008 04:54 AM. Lulz, concept is cool and drawing is pretty! you got tassadar's shape accurately (I think) and the zerg in the background are also well drawn. coloring is cute. XD EXP ... Click here to view this comment.

#8. Posted on July 10, 2008 04:48 AM. NICE... Looks like a kickass Protoss ninja! ... Click here to view this comment.

#9. Posted on July 08, 2008 07:17 AM. No offence, but, hell, if you don't think it looks like a scout, something must be very wrong with your eyes. XD Don't be angry at me!!! :0 ... Click here to view this comment.

#10. Posted on July 08, 2008 07:14 AM. Better GIF here: http://thefirewarriors.deviantart.com/art/SC-Marine-GIF-1-91035134 ... Click here to view this comment.

#11. Posted on July 08, 2008 05:47 AM. lol praetormike. If you look closely, you'll see his arm was supposed to be bent upwards (see the erasures?). I changed his pose at the last minute but forgot to fix his bicep. XD Thanks for the comments, guys! ... Click here to view this comment.

#12. Posted on July 08, 2008 05:27 AM. Nice. Cartoony is okay, it gives it a larger-than-life feeling. But you could've spent more effort on the clothes, they don't really look like the Ghost HEV suit. Still, a moving piece of work! I vote GOOD. PS. The expression is NICE! ... Click here to view this comment.

#13. Posted on July 08, 2008 05:23 AM. Kewl and Eeew at the same time. Once again, I like the technique. Lines and shading are like something from a comic book. That's pretty much all I can say about this. No comment about accuracy since it's your concept. Oh yeah, I almost forgot, Exp. ... Click here to view this comment.

#14. Posted on July 08, 2008 02:47 AM. Yeah, thanks, MoH. That's I'm using right now! ... Click here to view this comment.

#15. Posted on July 08, 2008 02:43 AM. WHO CARES WHAT'S GOING ON!?!? PWNZORING SCULPTING SKILLZ, MAN!!! And the set is awesome too! No one's still voted? oh, well. EXP from meeee!!! ... Click here to view this comment.

#16. Posted on July 07, 2008 03:12 AM. hahaha... yeah.. i art noob in animating... how exactly do you make the head move independantly from the neck? I couldn't find a tut to help me aside from armature, which rapes my PC. This is why I like modelling terrans 'cause they have nice, well defined parts. PS. or maybe i could hide that part in shadow? I dunno... just thinking out loud. ... Click here to view this comment.

#17. Posted on July 07, 2008 03:08 AM. Wow, man! I like your technique! this would easily get an EXP if it weren't for the face (which looks a bit queer). Still I vote EXP, nicely shaded. ... Click here to view this comment.

#18. Posted on July 06, 2008 05:39 AM. Wow, thanks! I'll gladly attempt a short comic, but i pretty much run on short batteries. That's why most of my artwork never take me longer than an hour or less. Longer than that then I mess it up and end up throwing it away... I'm trying to be more dedicated, but old habits die hard. I just need some more ammo. About the visor: It's a homage to my D&D heritage. PS. Thanks also for the votes! ... Click here to view this comment.

#19. Posted on July 06, 2008 02:15 AM. I see what I see and I like what I see... WOAH! That's a DT!? OMG, how did I not see that!? LOL, anyway. Nice cloaking effect. Pretty good shading and it reminds me of the Predator. As for the sketch, his hip bones don't protrude like they do in Blizzart, and I think his feet are queer. Other than that, EXP work! ... Click here to view this comment.

#20. Posted on July 06, 2008 02:08 AM. LOL something just came into mind. Here we are discussing the validity of BCs, Vespene Gas, and the creation of the SC campaigns; when the artwork we're supposed to comment on doesn't even have a BC in it (not counting the laser bolt that pwned the scout)! Damn! 28 comments already in less than a week! ... Click here to view this comment.

#21. Posted on July 04, 2008 07:29 PM. That makes sense. You've certainly done your homework, eh? ... Click here to view this comment.

#22. Posted on July 04, 2008 05:44 PM. Lolz an EMP wouldn't trigger a nuke. It can only shut down the nuke's guidance systems. also, it wouldn't detonate because the uranium core won't be able to start the chain reaction. Oh yeah, almost forgot. a nuke WILL detonate indiscrimanately if its fuel tank is ruptured (ie. a grenade). But who would be crazy enough to store a nuke loaded with fuel? That's why nukes are only fueled up when they are about to be used. back to the pic: The laser effect's actually pretty accurate if you've ... Click here to view this comment.

#23. Posted on July 04, 2008 03:19 AM. nope! I just finished reading Sum of All Fears last night and it had everything about it explained there. ... Click here to view this comment.

#24. Posted on July 03, 2008 07:16 AM. Oops. sorry maybe i wasn't clear on my PS. I meant the scout's air-to-air missiles. Still, Nukes stored in BCs are inert so they wouldn't detonate even if you kicked 'em. Or blew them up w/ a grenade. The uranium core has to be hit by an electron stream to actually cause a chain reaction, thereby causing an explosion. Also, nukes don't actually hit the ground. They explode around 100 above the ground and the blast does the rest. The stronger winds on the upper atmosphere help spread the fa ... Click here to view this comment.

#25. Posted on July 03, 2008 05:02 AM. Thanks, Champ! I couldn't figure out how to put italics in here. The Ghost's dialogue should've been formatted in small caps and the Marine's speech was supposed to be entirely italicized. How could the Ghost read a mission report if no one survived? I dunno, I just felt that it would go better that way. Thanks again, guys! ... Click here to view this comment.

#26. Posted on July 03, 2008 04:53 AM. The first is very accurate and the shape is also great. The second one, though accurate, is less smoother. If you look closely, its front part is too angular whence the sprite has it smooth and spherical. also, it looks bigger in relation to the back part than in your first sketch, though that may just be perspective. It's still great for a non-referenced sketch (the second one, i mean). I can't decide wether Good or EXP but i already clicked EXP looking forward to your Protoss warrior ... Click here to view this comment.

#27. Posted on July 03, 2008 04:43 AM. Kewl! That Scout got pwnzord! Yay for Terrans! The scouts look a bit too smooth. The wireframe sprite has the Scout with lots of spherical protrusions on its hull. But EXP still. PS. SO THAT"S WHERE THE MISSILES COME FROM!!! ... Click here to view this comment.

#28. Posted on July 03, 2008 04:39 AM. Ooooh... lightningy psi-blades and kewl armor (especially the legs) give it a good. plus the fact that you pwn me at drawing protoss. EXP, man. ... Click here to view this comment.

#29. Posted on July 03, 2008 04:36 AM. YES! I remember this sketch from long ago. Cool shading! The sidearm is also good, though I agree with XeroX that it looks like the SOCOM pistol from MGS. Good! ... Click here to view this comment.

#30. Posted on July 01, 2008 04:54 AM. Much better! but the legs still look a bit frail. Your shading is exceptional. Nice texturing there. The head and expression is proper. NOw it looks like a vicious dog. *reaches out* Here doggy, doggy, doggy. Here doggy, do--ARGH!!! JEEZUS!!! OH MAH GAWD!!! MY ARM!!! OH NOES!!! MY THIGH! IT'S CHEWING MY THIGH!! I-- AAAAAAAIIIEEEE!!! *expires* Er... ahem... sorry about that. I give GOOD. ... Click here to view this comment.

#31. Posted on June 29, 2008 04:08 AM. Awww... it are so CUUUUTEEE!!! Seriously though, it looks too small and frail. and the stubby tail and oversized head makes matters worse by making it comical. a civilian armed with nothing but his boots will be able to kill it! Nice penciling and shading. Average. next time you make 'lings... make 'em look more vicious!!! ... Click here to view this comment.

#32. Posted on June 29, 2008 03:51 AM. Thanks, guys! I actually submitted a render of this model posed and with a Gauss rifle a few hours after this, but i think the mods deleted it, or something. I dunno... It's just gone from my profile. check it out here: http://thefirewarriors.deviantart.com/art/SC1-Marine-2-90020332 ... Click here to view this comment.

#33. Posted on June 28, 2008 07:19 AM. Uh... What is THIS? I kinda get it... sorta... I see some marines, a siege tank and the hand... but it's very confusing. Average, man, i've seen you do better than this. ... Click here to view this comment.

#34. Posted on June 28, 2008 05:12 AM. O...M...G..! God I would hate to have that... thing stand in front of me... especially since I'm just a lowly marine. Aw what the hell, I'm gonna die anyway sooner or later! EAT LEAD, YOU-- GURGLK! *gored by tusks* I didn't think it would be this soon... *expires* Great model, MoH! You're really EXP at organic modelling! ... Click here to view this comment.

#35. Posted on June 27, 2008 11:34 PM. it's wierd though that they show up on our profiles... ah well. Nothing's perfect. ... Click here to view this comment.

#36. Posted on June 27, 2008 10:40 PM. Oooh... you're right! Dammet! I was thinking that the suit would act as another muscular system and augment the Ghost's already formidable strength but... I am still struggling to improve how I draw slim bodies. I am much used to bulky machines and stuff. ... Click here to view this comment.

#37. Posted on June 27, 2008 08:57 PM. if you watch the intro cinematic for Brood War... the BC's pretty big! ... Click here to view this comment.

#38. Posted on June 27, 2008 08:55 PM. wha!? really!? no more pwning lazerz for colossus?!?! NOOOO!!! eh... ahem... sorry UR DRAWING SKILLZ PWN, man!!! (I don't even wanna imagine what it feels like to be that 'rine over there...) EXP, GADDAMMIT! ... Click here to view this comment.

#39. Posted on June 27, 2008 08:52 PM. Lol. ever imagine how many polys the marines in SC2 are gonna have? Pure murder! Thanks, I am learning how to UV map right now. ... Click here to view this comment.

#40. Posted on June 27, 2008 08:49 PM. Nice sketch. I like the way your style has improved. Some parts are not really that accurate but it's instantly recognizable. Problem is with the lines, well at least some of them. They seem to be wobbly (ie. the visor) and the feet could use some more work. the left hand seems to be smaller than the right and the Gauss rifle's pistol grip is queer. But then... Again, I commend your shading (especially on the shoulders)! Gives it a rough, grainy texture. All in all I think it's worth ... Click here to view this comment.

#41. Posted on June 27, 2008 03:42 PM. WTH!? Why did this become Average!?! For a WIP, this deserves a Good or higher, Gaddammit! ... Click here to view this comment.

#42. Posted on June 27, 2008 03:34 PM. I am intimidated by Yafray 'cause I don't understand it yet... Thanks anyway, I'll try to g't that leg problem fixed. PS. You can't see some new work yet because they haven't been approved by the mods yet. ... Click here to view this comment.

#43. Posted on June 27, 2008 03:32 PM. Dang! Anyway, awesome work! ... Click here to view this comment.

#44. Posted on June 27, 2008 03:54 AM. Damn it looks so much like the sprite! Is Sons of War gonna be converted to full 3D now? Ya hey? Make a wallpaper of them rushing a lone marine!!! EXP Gaddammit! ... Click here to view this comment.

#45. Posted on June 26, 2008 03:34 AM. Awesome! EXP ... Click here to view this comment.

#46. Posted on June 26, 2008 03:29 AM. I see that a skintight muscle suit isn't a very popular choice for you guys... Maybe I should just stick to the tried-and-tested vest concept, eh? *starts laughing manically* I shall begin tonight!!! PS. I'm very sorry for the anatomy problem. ... Click here to view this comment.

#47. Posted on June 24, 2008 04:25 AM. yeah, if you remember my old Ghost sketch, the pose was somewhat inspired from a promo pic of crysis i found on the 'net. Sorry about the abs, XD I don't have any anatomy books around. I'll make a better one. thanks for that guys! ... Click here to view this comment.

#48. Posted on June 22, 2008 10:57 PM. Ah... whaterver people say about this, I like it! them Nydus Worms remind me of the sandworms in Dune, though... EXP! ... Click here to view this comment.

#49. Posted on June 22, 2008 10:56 PM. NICE!!! Was it on MS paint like teh other ones? Pretty good job, man! Chuck Norris can't be stopped by immortal shields!!! His roundhouse kick will catapult the immortal into another dimension! and then he will kill it using his teeth!!! EXP ... Click here to view this comment.

#50. Posted on June 22, 2008 07:26 PM. *cue in Star Wars V theme music* It's Rogue squadron trying to bring down the Imperial At-ATs!!! Lolz Good for me right now cause i couldn't recognize the two ships for a while. Wait! Oh now I gets!!! oh shit! Those were the marines!!! OMG how could I not see that!! lol, still GOod though! ... Click here to view this comment.

#51. Posted on June 22, 2008 02:32 AM. Lolz it's pretty squashed... just DL it to view it properly, i think... ... Click here to view this comment.

#52. Posted on June 20, 2008 11:22 PM. Well, I guess everyone's entitled to their own opinion. ... Click here to view this comment.

#53. Posted on June 20, 2008 05:14 PM. Oorah! Nice work, OLM! I'll be waiting for the next one too! ... Click here to view this comment.

#54. Posted on June 20, 2008 05:03 PM. Poor Ghost, lol. Yeah, pretty much an awesome piece of work! Descriptive and riveting, as well. EXP! ... Click here to view this comment.

#55. Posted on June 20, 2008 04:51 PM. ahahahaha! It seems wierd that a game could have 29 sequels. Nicely written and hilarious though it grinds down at the conclusion. GOOD. ... Click here to view this comment.

#56. Posted on June 20, 2008 04:40 PM. Me thinks the hydra is hugging that marine... made me lol. I say GOOD ... Click here to view this comment.

#57. Posted on June 20, 2008 04:35 PM. Woah. I thought it only had one leg at first, then I saw the other one. Yeah, how does it attack? Those claws seem puny when compared to the body. Make them a bit bulkier? Add a tail maybe? With spikes? Anyway, awesome art! Keep making more! EXP ... Click here to view this comment.

#58. Posted on June 20, 2008 04:32 PM. VICTORY!!! Try making the flag more dynamic. Make it wave behind him and add more creases. Other than that, this is something I really love. GOOD Oorah for Terrans! ... Click here to view this comment.

#59. Posted on June 20, 2008 04:29 PM. YAY! Someone finally made a joke about stimpacks!!! And it made me laugh too! The art kinda sucks but realizing that this was made in MS paint and that its quality is appropriate to its setting unlike other MS Paint works. I give EXP! make me lol more! ... Click here to view this comment.

#60. Posted on June 20, 2008 06:28 AM. ahahaha! where'd that WMD come from!!??? lol playing fetch with a Zergling using an H-bomb! but it was kinda confusing at first. aw but what the hell, it made me lol so EXP! ... Click here to view this comment.

#61. Posted on June 20, 2008 06:24 AM. LOL "OVERMIND GO BOOM!" EXP for this sketch and double for the mod! ... Click here to view this comment.

#62. Posted on June 20, 2008 06:21 AM. wait! what if the colossus just steps over the wire??? its steps are high enough to miss it completely! lol! Marine1: Uh... Sarge? Marine2: Yeah? Marine1: I think we should use boxes next time... Marine2: Dammit! I like it very much, thank you! EXP ... Click here to view this comment.

#63. Posted on June 20, 2008 06:18 AM. Ow..! I like it! The storytelling is top-notch, but the miscontinuity with the original SC storyline kinda shook me a bit. Then i realized it must've been intentional. Cheers! EXP ... Click here to view this comment.

#64. Posted on June 20, 2008 06:10 AM. w00t! sketches of other Zergy units! at last! And frankly, this one didn't disappoint me! EXP! ... Click here to view this comment.

#65. Posted on June 20, 2008 03:04 AM. WAHAHAHA! "LEGALIZE STIMPACKS"!!! XD Nice one! All so Terrany! Kewl marine art too! ... Click here to view this comment.

#66. Posted on June 19, 2008 02:30 AM. thanks kitten! it's people like you who make sure I keep improving! ... Click here to view this comment.

#67. Posted on June 13, 2008 08:03 AM. I likes it. EXP from me! PS. We'll only stop forgiving you if you guys just pack up and leave! *starts worshipping* ... Click here to view this comment.

#68. Posted on June 13, 2008 04:18 AM. oh... wow... a nose. :/ It's not very accurate but I see you made this in school... while you were bored... okay... Well... He's a bit chubby. If you want to draw a protoss, any kind of protoss, please don't make a nose... or a mouth. I can forgive the thumb and feet problems MoH mentioned above, but not a nose... or mouth. Nope No siree, bob. What I do like is the shading. It gives your drawings depth and shows us that this isn't just a flat picture. I'll give you that. Still NO ... Click here to view this comment.

#69. Posted on June 13, 2008 04:09 AM. On it's own, this is a pretty nice sketch! BUT... it's a far cry from what a real (in a starcraft kinda way) valkyrie looks like. If you look at the Terran ending cinematic in brood war, you'll get a closer view of a Valkyrie, from behind though. the wings are wrong. the fins on the wingtips must extend to the bottom and point slightly towards each other. I think the cockpit is a bit off too, but it may just be my own concieving of what a valkyrie cockpit looks like. It's also a bit ... Click here to view this comment.

#70. Posted on June 13, 2008 03:57 AM. why only so few people have commented/voted on this one!?! It's one of the best series on this site! I mean, come on! all it takes is a click of a button! ... Click here to view this comment.

#71. Posted on June 11, 2008 04:14 AM. *collapses* so... awesome... *twitch* *twitch* *expires* Your work's so sharp it kills! ... Click here to view this comment.

#72. Posted on June 11, 2008 04:13 AM. *continues from previous comment* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! 'nuff said. I'm off to look at your other works now. ... Click here to view this comment.

#73. Posted on June 11, 2008 04:12 AM. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH...! *breathe* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH...! Dude you are so cooool! ... Click here to view this comment.

#74. Posted on June 10, 2008 05:28 AM. Ok. I'll work on it. ... Click here to view this comment.

#75. Posted on June 10, 2008 05:13 AM. Wow! I could never do landscapes that good! I was trying to find an EPIC vote but the highest was only Exceptional. ... Click here to view this comment.

#76. Posted on June 09, 2008 05:55 AM. Kewl... You could add shades of him running, dodging or striking stuff in the background to represent his battle meditation. BTW i like the hands. they really look like Protoss hands. ... Click here to view this comment.

#77. Posted on June 08, 2008 08:26 PM. I used an 800x600 canvas. And I forgot to shade the tongue. damn. Thanks for the comments, guys! ... Click here to view this comment.

#78. Posted on June 08, 2008 06:25 PM. I think (and that's a big I Think) that they are connected to a backpack-mounted powerplant to assist the Ghost in moving faster than normal. and to power the goggles. and the cloak. IMO. ... Click here to view this comment.

#79. Posted on June 08, 2008 06:03 AM. CREEEPY... Very... Nicely written though. OLM pretty much summed it up. Not so resident evil-esque actually IMO. It lacks the crappy/cheesy dialogue and repetative hand gesturing. problem: Cpl. Rice's name in the first part is Alan Edgar Rice. By the closing parts, his name transforms into Edgar Allen Rice. I dunno if it's intentional but I can see a homage to one of the best horror-mystery writers ever and another author, no? I shall be waiting for the horde of zombies/mutants/dead- ... Click here to view this comment.

#80. Posted on June 08, 2008 03:41 AM. GOOD GOD!!! Awesome model! TEXTURES WOULD ELEVATE THIS MODEL TO GODHOOD! Oh yeah, so would a background and some wraiths/banshees/dropships/tomas flying around. Plus a few 'rines. *wipes drool off mouth* *sigh* You gotta hate technological limitations. I know I do. Must vote EXP... ... Click here to view this comment.

#81. Posted on June 08, 2008 03:22 AM. Is he a DT? Right now, it's pretty much an EXP but for the unfinished areas. Shading, though, is excellent. IMO he looks like he's casting a spell. Maybe you could add a Khaydarin crystal and make it look like he's using it (I dunno for what). but that's just my opinion. Excellent work(in-progress)! P.S. is that a shield? ... Click here to view this comment.

#82. Posted on June 07, 2008 12:42 AM. DAMN..! Sweet model! I still can't model stuff that actually look mechanical! Is the secret in the textures or what? Nevermind my rambling! This model is extremely faithful to the SCG design! And the dirt and scorch decals give it a really authentic Terran feel. EPIC! REQUEST!1! Add your Wraiths, Siege Tank and marine models to make it more than epic (is there anything higher than epic?)! EXP PS. Lupet mo, p're! ... Click here to view this comment.

#83. Posted on June 07, 2008 12:05 AM. You've got sharp eyes! I didn't even notice that 'til you mentioned it! ... Click here to view this comment.

#84. Posted on June 05, 2008 07:09 PM. Does anyone have any tips on how to model things that look mechanical? I use the subsurf modifier to model but then they all look bland and not techy enough. Just PM me, mkay? BTW thanks for the comments! ... Click here to view this comment.

#85. Posted on June 04, 2008 06:45 PM. Lwereworlf: sorry. I meant some inaccuracies. Hmmm... a Gauss carbine, you say..? *begins thinking really hard for next sketch* SgtHK: Ayt! nasuspetsa ko pinoy ka rin nung nakita ko sig mo sa deviantart. Thx for teh comments, guys! ... Click here to view this comment.

#86. Posted on June 02, 2008 06:42 PM. woah psychocutter! you're filipino too? ... Click here to view this comment.

#87. Posted on May 31, 2008 04:13 PM. WHAT!? RAM only!?!? Dammit!!! My brothers' have been bugging me for a new video card and their main reason why I should contribute is that it will make my work faster! Aaaargh! Heh, thanks though. ... Click here to view this comment.

#88. Posted on May 31, 2008 04:50 AM. You've managed a story in a memorandum format filled with distinct characters and have described them sufficiently without getting bogged down and losing the reader. Above that; a large vocabulary, top-notch grammar (I think) and plot, IMO this is worth an EXP. Keep it up! I'm getting giddy for the next one! ... Click here to view this comment.

#89. Posted on May 30, 2008 04:28 AM. <whisper> awesome...</whisper> So much has changed in the protagonist since the first episode. I wonder what he'll do next..? finally I understand why you used "Merchant of Death" as the title! ... Click here to view this comment.

#90. Posted on May 30, 2008 04:13 AM. Glad to see Ep. 2 is out. Better this time. The narrative is good, much better than the previous one! I don't know about the idea of a Zerg conqueror, though. Aren't the Zerg supposed to be a swarm collective? Is Polion a cerebrate, or another Genex? But it does sound interesting. Still, there remain some errors but most of them are trivial. keep it up! I await the next installment! GOOD! Just keep beefing up and you'll get an EXP in no time! BTW: I DID notice the "jello&quo ... Click here to view this comment.

#91. Posted on May 30, 2008 02:16 AM. amazing... frankly, this is an awesome piece of work! EXP PS. Colonel Sanders is from KFC! Bwahaha! ... Click here to view this comment.

#92. Posted on May 26, 2008 06:13 PM. I'm gone... LOLWTF!?!?!11 Made me ROFLOLMAOCOPTERBANZAI... BWAhAhAHAHA! ... Click here to view this comment.

#93. Posted on May 26, 2008 05:56 PM. *copy pastes comment from your earlier marine* (continues) *droool* again, awesome detail! but shouldn't the gun's buttstock be telescoping? but that's just a small technicality. Fabulous boots... Mmmmm... PS. I am now dlling 3DSMax from 'net. ... Click here to view this comment.

#94. Posted on May 26, 2008 05:51 PM. Oh... My... God... I was wondering what happenned to the marine model you and SpaceSepp were working on. Turns out he just evolved. Awesome render! combining the configurations of the marines from SC1 and 2 is a great idea. God-frickin-awed detail on the servos! How do make faces!? Waaaaah..! I would love to see this textured an decalled! *drool* Blender crashes when i try to give my 'rine model a skeleton. EXP raised to the power of infinity. ... Click here to view this comment.

#95. Posted on May 26, 2008 05:42 PM. Nice treads! Good detail on the tank and the marine! though i think you shouldn't have inverted the colors. Makes it look like a sketch on a blackboard. Oh what the heck, it looks cool! More work on the tank's chassis. GOOD ... Click here to view this comment.

#96. Posted on May 25, 2008 10:58 PM. the new heroes are fine with me. finally unique models. at least it won't be teal dot in a red sea anymore. maybe some differences in armor config as long as they're just the same size and not too flashy. What if the campaign heroes were like in DoW: Dark Crusade? Someone already said it before, you can buy them improved armor or weapons using the money you win in between missions. AND... It'll alter their player model so that the more gear you get them, the more awesome they'll look. ( ... Click here to view this comment.

#97. Posted on May 25, 2008 10:32 PM. wow the chest plate reminds me of w40k space marines... i like the detail. 'cept for the midget legs. AVG ... Click here to view this comment.

#98. Posted on May 25, 2008 07:06 AM. Thanks for the feedback! I dunno if I'll be able to finish this series 'cause my pc got reformatted and all my stuff is gone. I'm currently trying to rewrite the next twelve chapters from scratch. Hopefully i won't rush it. Starship troopers was the first book i ever read that struck a chord within me. It has resulted in a chronically progressing addiction/obsession to space marines and bulky power armor. You may see some other influences of Warhammer 40k, Doom, Killzone and Clancy in my w ... Click here to view this comment.

#99. Posted on May 25, 2008 06:56 AM. thanks for the comments, guys! PC was laggy. Was reformatted so i lost all my stuff there. this site was to be the only place where my old sketches can be found. *grump* too bad about the server. all that work... aw hell. I'll just make better ones! i pretty much drew this sketch in the middle of the night. Pure sleep-deprived speed never looked so good. lol Ghosts with boobies comin' at'cha! (once i get my bum off killzone liberation, that is.) ... Click here to view this comment.

#100. Posted on May 21, 2008 08:20 PM. Nice! great story and storytelling. Why does the man called Newgan remind me of Duran. Is Duu'Ran the same Samir Duran in BW? Are the Hybrids the creatures he was making in Dark Origin? OMG so many questions! NVM that! I'll just read the previous chapters! BTW EXP! PS: You make the zerg sound creepier than they are! D: ... Click here to view this comment.

#101. Posted on May 21, 2008 08:15 PM. WOOOOW... i am... speechless... It must've taken (almost) forever to write this! OMGOMGOMG... kinda like battlestar-galactica, 'specially with the ship-to-ship battle. I like the relationship between the characters. The admiral's son and others. I am totally waiting for the next part! PS: I am now going to read all the previous episodes! ... Click here to view this comment.

#102. Posted on May 21, 2008 08:03 PM. OMGLOL I had fun reading this! Keep making more! GOOD! BTW: an Ion is actually an atom with more electrons than protons. I believe a quark is smaller than a proton since that's what it's made of. ... Click here to view this comment.

#103. Posted on May 21, 2008 05:24 PM. awesome sketch! did you use the SC:G renders as reference? Lotsa detail here, 'specially on the suits and guns. Posing is somewhat okay though it seems a bit awkward for the male ghost. faces are okay, nice mask effect. the goggles make them look badass. Oh wait, they are! EXP ... Click here to view this comment.

#104. Posted on May 20, 2008 10:00 PM. Nice! a marked improvement! very good how you showed us the inside of the Genex's mind. Also, doing that despicable act stays in character of the zerg hybrid(?). some minor spelling mistakes but that really doesn't detract from the read. I give it a good but be sure to keep improving! ... Click here to view this comment.

#105. Posted on May 20, 2008 05:48 AM. Lol it's like one of those documentaries where the narrator gives names to animals and tells a story. Damn... poor zergling... i sympathize... EXP ... Click here to view this comment.

#106. Posted on May 20, 2008 05:24 AM. D-A-M-N... A rattling good yarn. WE WANT MOREZ!!! ... Click here to view this comment.

#107. Posted on May 20, 2008 12:38 AM. Ghost rules! too bad it was 'indefinitely postponed'... fraggin' development hell... Next three chapters are on the way, as soon as i get my lazy carcass of mah bed. Thanks! BTW: WtFoMgLoLrOfLmAoCoPtErBaNzAi!!!11one!11??? All mah submissions 'cept mah fiction are gone!!! ZOMG!!! FICTION WAS MEANT TO SURVIVE!!! LOL XD joke... ... Click here to view this comment.

#108. Posted on May 19, 2008 07:16 PM. Being short is okay. Besides, I see this is just a prologue. The plot is good (biological warfare and all that) but the storytelling could be better. Not that redundant but some sentences just feel wrong. (Quote) "Much without losing some of there swarms." (/Quote) See? I think you misplaced "their" with "there". I dunno about the others since i'm not really an expert on grammar and stuff. I vote average right now but I'll be waiting for the next pa ... Click here to view this comment.

#109. Posted on May 19, 2008 06:16 PM. lolwtfbbqzomg!!!1one!!!11 uber lol joke jello12. ... Click here to view this comment.

#110. Posted on May 19, 2008 05:08 AM. HOLY SOB... i could never draw females that good! ... Click here to view this comment.

#111. Posted on May 18, 2008 07:19 PM. OMGLOL hahahaha! hamster powered pentium! ROFLOLMAOCOPTER!!!111 ... Click here to view this comment.

#112. Posted on May 18, 2008 06:30 PM. Hmmm... i can't draw faces well, as you can see... maybe she refuses to remove her mask in front of someone but has a sexy voice. :3 i dunno... Or i could base her on Luger from Killzone... she was hot (maybe)... sorry didn't watch underworld 'cause i dun't like vampires and werewolves much. Thanks anyway. ... Click here to view this comment.

#113. Posted on May 18, 2008 08:11 AM. OMGLOL I made big major mistake here! It was actually "Locked, cocked, and ready to rock!"!!!1 Whoops wrong title and caption, sorry! ... Click here to view this comment.

#114. Posted on May 18, 2008 07:53 AM. I dunno about hair since it seems impractical; not so stealthy if you had a braid of hair following you around or getting snagged on branches and stuff. Anyway a beautiful girl should also look good without hair, IMO. :3 Classic splinter cell formula. If the gun is too big, how will she carry it around without banging it up on something? also, the idea is not to attract too much attention so bulk goes out the window along with kick-ass. Even if it were collapsible, where should she put the pi ... Click here to view this comment.

#115. Posted on May 17, 2008 12:44 AM. OMG! so many technical terms! Do you read biology books or something? I liked this. It was really unsuspecting that a zerg brood would want to seek refuge with a protoss fleet. Also, your idea of a virus was very original; unlike using the same old psi disrupters over and over again! I may not know grammer well, but i think that this is a great piece of work! My only beef is that it's too short! As the action builds, it suddenly cuts off! this may be good for a few times, but it sometim ... Click here to view this comment.

#116. Posted on May 17, 2008 12:26 AM. lol if it were from a marine's biology notes, there would be lots of "SHOOT HERE" and "DON'T SHOOT HERE" annotations! Nice 'ling! I give Good! ... Click here to view this comment.

#117. Posted on May 16, 2008 05:31 PM. Haha... I suck at drawing female anatomy IMO. ... Click here to view this comment.

#118. Posted on May 16, 2008 05:28 PM. Art is average. but the exploding cranium and LOL made me vote good! keep it up! maybe you can crop your drawings because there's too much blank space? ... Click here to view this comment.

#119. Posted on May 16, 2008 05:20 PM. lol! Atomic Kitten! your item number 4 just slapped me in the face! before i read it, i already gave the new version a sword at her back and heels. also I changed the goggles a bit to make it distinct from "King". I'll be posting it here soon! thanks! (Sorry for the thighs and some parts! seriously, I am really used to drawing either loose cloth or tight musculature. maybe i need to smooth it out a bit more?) ... Click here to view this comment.

#120. Posted on May 16, 2008 05:10 PM. haha... i noticed that! only the legs though. nice detail! some shading and it would be better! I vote GOOD! ... Click here to view this comment.

#121. Posted on May 16, 2008 04:10 AM. Hasharin: LOLOLOLOLOL... (infinitum ad nausem) 'nuff said. Thanks! SgtHK: I don't dig the C10 rifle much, prolly because it's too... large. yeah. i saw your diagram of the C10 and i thought it was... wait, no... it was awesome! The AGR-14 is a more compact and versatile variant. And practice does make perfect! BTW: Queen will be using the C10. ... Click here to view this comment.

#122. Posted on May 15, 2008 05:08 PM. fat? really? when i showed this to my brother, he said it was too thin! lol. to each his own i guess. Kthx anywayz. ... Click here to view this comment.

#123. Posted on May 15, 2008 04:42 PM. I tried drawing a female Ghost last night. everytime i got to the upper torso, i begin blushing and suddenly throw it away.lol. I'm taking therapy to get around this. ... Click here to view this comment.

#124. Posted on May 15, 2008 04:40 PM. To HolyDarkness: I know I F***ed up his hands, but people do hold rifles at the lower recievers. now if i only drew it a bit higher... >.< I tried making some comics once... nevr got past page one. Thanks! ... Click here to view this comment.

#125. Posted on May 15, 2008 05:39 AM. oops... mega noob mistake. sorey about that. Thanks! hmmm... no comment about the butt? X3 ... Click here to view this comment.

#126. Posted on May 15, 2008 05:38 AM. DD Hmm... I made the firebat "rook" because i think of it as a strong, single minded (moves only straight) shock troop type of piece. For me, "knights" and "bishops" are tactically-sound (moves diagonally or to the side instead of rushing headlong). But I'm thinking about it... Thanks! BTW: define stumpy? people keep saying it but i dunno what they mean by it! Sorry for teh Noob question. ... Click here to view this comment.

#127. Posted on May 15, 2008 04:26 AM. this is the part where i have to persuade you guys to vote EXP! Why? because of his butt! it took me lotsa tries to get that one little detail perfect! make him look manly! lolz joking kthx anywayz for critics and comments. ... Click here to view this comment.

#128. Posted on May 15, 2008 03:01 AM. oh... sorry bout that... m'kay... my earphones suck... XD ... Click here to view this comment.

#129. Posted on May 15, 2008 02:57 AM. Oh... Ayt, I'll look for some tuts on UV mapping! Thanks! ... Click here to view this comment.

#130. Posted on May 14, 2008 05:09 PM. Hmmm... yeah, it does look wierd. ... Click here to view this comment.

#131. Posted on May 14, 2008 08:37 AM. What's UV map? ... I am still major n00b in understanding 3d terminology. ... Click here to view this comment.

#132. Posted on May 14, 2008 08:35 AM. XD No thanks. I'd rather it was my own hard work. I'll be improving this. ... Click here to view this comment.

#133. Posted on May 14, 2008 08:32 AM. "What can I say? I'm a talented individual!" -Darth Revan, Knights of the Old Republic /\ / \ Ignore this || LOL, thanks! ... Click here to view this comment.

#134. Posted on May 14, 2008 04:43 AM. to mranderson: Jah... maybe i should've. thanks for that! To PT32: Though our army is massive, are enough to hold back the ignoble tide of non-readers? Is our will strong enough to withstand the illiterate hordes!? YES, i tell you! We shall fight and we shall CONQUER!!! ... Click here to view this comment.

#135. Posted on May 13, 2008 05:56 PM. Extreme modelling!!! DAKKA DAKKA DAKKA! ... Click here to view this comment.

#136. Posted on May 13, 2008 05:53 PM. thanks! actually i have several models of other units: a zergling, a firebat and an SCV. but i haven't submitted them yet because i'm still not happy with how they turned out. for me, the Zergling was the hardest to model, unlike marines and SCVs. thanks though and I'll try to expand my horizons. ... Click here to view this comment.

#137. Posted on May 13, 2008 08:32 AM. Look! He's got new gloves! ... Click here to view this comment.

#138. Posted on May 13, 2008 04:42 AM. Thanks, Sarge! I'll keep that in mind! ... Click here to view this comment.

#139. Posted on May 13, 2008 04:40 AM. *the 357th Marine Corps drop into the midst of the bedlam and open fire* The battle has been joined! All marines, ADVANCE!!! *marines begin systematically executing non-readers* ... Click here to view this comment.

#140. Posted on May 12, 2008 08:05 PM. Thanks for the feedback! I am trying to animate my models and make'em walk but it get's very frustrating. Does anyone know how to animate actions like walking or running easily on Blender3D? just PM to let me know, kthx! ... Click here to view this comment.

#141. Posted on May 12, 2008 07:32 PM. XDDD YAY! I was wondering about the hands. In the Amerigo cinematic, the marine's hands were modeled like a glove. but in the Brood War Intro, they were HUGE and machiny-thingy(wtf?). OK, that's something i ought to change. Thanks for the feedback! ... Click here to view this comment.

#142. Posted on May 12, 2008 07:28 PM. not voting is fine with this as long as you tell me what you think would be greatly improved. k thx! ... Click here to view this comment.

#143. Posted on May 12, 2008 04:37 AM. I... Am... Speechless... I could never draw anything like this!! This is incredible! EXP from me! ... Click here to view this comment.

#144. Posted on May 12, 2008 04:30 AM. Oorah for marines! nice intro and descriptions. some spelling mistakes here and there but all in all a mighty fine piece! Actions were described beautifully. maybe make it longer next time? ... Click here to view this comment.

#145. Posted on May 12, 2008 04:13 AM. Hrrr.... *Cocks imaginary Gauss rifle* Then We Will Make Them!!! *Sprays room of imaginary non-readers with imaginary depleted uranium bullets* whoops! I ran out of imaginary ammo! There's just too many of them!!! DX ... Click here to view this comment.

#146. Posted on May 11, 2008 08:56 PM. Ja! I might try to clean it up later. Thanks for the comments! ... Click here to view this comment.

#147. Posted on May 11, 2008 08:51 PM. Some modelling was done but all I'm trying to do here is to get the basic shape, so it's low detailed. I'll be improving on this in my next submission. Please Critic. Kthx! WHAT FAILS TO KILL ME ONLY MAKES ME STRONGER!!! ... Click here to view this comment.

#148. Posted on May 11, 2008 06:46 PM. LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL! 'Nuff Said! XD EXP ... Click here to view this comment.

#149. Posted on May 11, 2008 07:39 AM. Why does he hold his gun like that? Nevermind! Nice detail on the armor but the legs look a bit scrawny. the feet are stubby (i think). but the hands are awesome! One of my favorite 'rines! ... Click here to view this comment.

#150. Posted on May 11, 2008 07:32 AM. The background is awesome and the ambient light gives it a creepy atmosphere, like Zerg could come bursting out the ground at any second! My beef is with the armor, it doesn't look bulky enough IMO, but still good! but the face!!! OMG!!! It's incredible!!! How do you do it??!! EXP because of everything! ... Click here to view this comment.

#151. Posted on May 11, 2008 07:26 AM. *Bows down repeatedly* AVE IMPERATOR!!! MORITURI TE SALUTANT!!! XD Thanks!!! ... Click here to view this comment.

#152. Posted on May 11, 2008 07:21 AM. I am inclined to agree with all of you! We must revive the FICTION movement! > Thanks for the feedback! ... Click here to view this comment.

#153. Posted on May 11, 2008 06:55 AM. Thanks guys! I was focusing too much on the torso area that i neglected much of the limbs. Sorry for that, I'll do better in my next 'rine! Oh yeah, the SC1 Gauss rifle was actually based on the German MG42 machine gun from WW2, just with a grenade launcher attached. Kthx! PS: SgtHK! I have built thee an altar from the bones of thy enemies! Stand still while I worship you!!! ... Click here to view this comment.

#154. Posted on May 11, 2008 06:49 AM. hahaha... thanks for that, guys! I'm sorry I sat on my sketch pad; hence the bad editing. but oh well... I'll make sure to look before I sit down next time! i'm also sorry for the enlarged crotch plate! DX I didn't mean for it to get that big!!! FORGIVE MEEEE!!! ... Click here to view this comment.

#155. Posted on May 08, 2008 05:26 AM. OORAH!!! EAT THIS!!! DAKKA DAKKA DAKKA!!! Damn! I love this! EXP! ... Click here to view this comment.

#156. Posted on May 07, 2008 06:34 PM. LOL i could imagine him running up some stairs then stumbling and rolling back down, cursing all the way! ... Click here to view this comment.

#157. Posted on May 07, 2008 06:17 PM. yeaaah... well having it sit here for like... 4 days... and still no comment or even a vote... that kinda saps you of confidence... ah well.... thanks for that deadfast! i'll try to make another one... ... Click here to view this comment.

#158. Posted on May 07, 2008 04:54 AM. Please Delete This... I am totally ashamed at myself. T_T ... Click here to view this comment.

#159. Posted on April 10, 2008 05:05 PM. Thanks for the feedback! I tried to make the water turbulent because of all the armored bodies thrashing around, but i gues i just screwed it up badly. The tutorial was nice, though me in my noob blender mode found it hard to understand. even when i followed every instruction, it doesn't mimic the effect i saw on the screenshot. Thanks anyway, I'll be studying this again to improve it! ... Click here to view this comment.

#160. Posted on April 09, 2008 04:53 PM. Once again, thanks for the feedback! HolyDarkness: Yep, it's not you. The ground texture was stretched (I don't know why) when I resized the base plane to make a corridor. maybe it's because the texture image of a steel floor i used was small. The shadow was another noob mistake I made. The body of the second marine was actually rotated a bit to the right. so that the light would hit the wall; but i made the lamp weak so that it wouldn't disrupt the picture. All in all, I am working to rid my ... Click here to view this comment.

#161. Posted on April 08, 2008 09:58 PM. Oh Sweet! Dude, you don't need inspiration!!! Exceptional! ... Click here to view this comment.

#162. Posted on April 08, 2008 05:24 PM. I know Blender is awesome. It's the only one I've been using since i started... which was like a few months ago. actually this marine model has some basic modeling done by using the subsurf modifier on cubes. anyway, thanks for the feedback! ... Click here to view this comment.

#163. Posted on April 08, 2008 05:20 PM. Thanks for the feedback! To DashRendaer: I started using Blender early this year when it was part of our curriculum. We were taught the basicss and used it to make our projects. But the modeling and texture stuff was kinda left out so i had to use tutorials from the 'net. Btw, i saw your "dating kerry" comic and i thought it was awesome you made faces like those on Blender! i'm still learning how and am too noob to make any protoss or zerg. XD To masterofhobbiton: yeah, i gues ... Click here to view this comment.

#164. Posted on April 07, 2008 08:09 PM. ZOMFGWTFBBQ!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!! I'm a huge fan of 3D art and I think, wait... I KNOW!!! that you will be my new God!!! Now sit still while I worship you... *Bows down repeatedly* EXCEEEEPTIOOOONAAAAL!!1 *accidentally Slams head on floor And Passes out* ... Click here to view this comment.

#165. Posted on April 07, 2008 08:04 PM. OMGOMGOMG!!! Even though they get owned a lot of times... Marines are still my favorite!!! You and SgtHK are my idols!!! OMGOMGOMG!!! *Bows down repeatedly* EXCEEEEPTTIOOOONAAAAAL!!! *accidentally slams head on floor and passes out* ... Click here to view this comment.

#166. Posted on April 07, 2008 07:46 PM. nice technique on blender! i couldn't do faces cause i'm still a noob! their facial expressions and body language really lends an aura of comedic urgency to the atmosphere! Exceptional for me, since you used Blender and made this! ... Click here to view this comment.

#167. Posted on April 07, 2008 05:41 PM. yeah, i agree. blender doesn't have much modeling tools and im still trying to get used to it. btw, i'm learning to add textures and creating more poses now! XD my next submission should be a bit better. thanks! ... Click here to view this comment.

#168. Posted on April 07, 2008 05:38 PM. yay! thanks for the nice comments! oh yeah, Masterofhobbiton, i saw all your MS paint works and i reaally liked them! ... Click here to view this comment.